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    FOR THA SAKE OF HEAT (THE ADULTERED LIFE)

    FOR THA SAKE OF HEAT... WE NEED TO HAVE STATUES THAT WE DONT NEED TO SEE

    THE STORY OF THE BRICK-MASON... MIXING CONCRETE, CONCRETE WE MIXING... GRAINS OF SAND ... WATER ... MORTAR....
    THE DAY MIGHT BE HOT... AND CAN GET HOTTER... NEED NOT REPENT... NEED NOT BUILD ... JUST MIX... FOR A DAY...
    BUT IS A DAY A DAY OR IS A DAY A YEAR ... OR MAYBE A DAY COULD BE A MOMENT IN TIME.. SO HOW MANY MASON DO WE REALLY HAVE? LOL...
    NEED NOT GIVE UP YO PATH...
    THE STORY OF THE BRICK-MASON... THE ADULTERED LIFE
    aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing

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    Re: FOR THA SAKE OF HEAT (THE ADULTERED LIFE)

    So lol i'm going to leave this cause i think you a cool dude and i appreciate your activity here, but only written pieces can go in the open mic section.
    you've been dropping tons of freewrites, some are better than others, just keep writing man, read more pieces. you should take topic more and give it more effort, otherwise there is the cypher section too, to keep posting up!
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    Re: FOR THA SAKE OF HEAT (THE ADULTERED LIFE)

    i understand the essence of poetry

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    to each his own... but if you really want ppl to reead yo shit... the concise is king
    aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing

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    Re: FOR THA SAKE OF HEAT (THE ADULTERED LIFE)

    haha i like the zen sayings, concise, is king!
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    Re: FOR THA SAKE OF HEAT (THE ADULTERED LIFE)

    Butt... Is Concise really abridged or abbreviated or is it really (shorthand) ...

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    and that is my rebuttal
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    Re: FOR THA SAKE OF HEAT (THE ADULTERED LIFE)

    Quote Originally Posted by Astabished View Post
    Butt... Is Concise really abridged or abbreviated or is it really (shorthand) ...

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    and that is my rebuttal
    post lyrics, not songs in the writers section fammo... let me rip them words apart and see if we can help you help us!
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    Bye bye black bird Poeta Demonio's Avatar
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    Re: FOR THA SAKE OF HEAT (THE ADULTERED LIFE)

    Dude is way too hilarious to shut down haha

    Still, check yo'self. :P
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