User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 11 of 11

Thread: Dear Mama (Remix)

  1. November 29th, 2003, 10:14 PM #1
    LoCo
    LoCo is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    Chicago.
    Age
    40
    Posts
    377
    Battle Record
    0-1

    Dear Mama (Remix)

    Repped:
    The RehaB
    MP~PHASIZ
    WORD~PERFECT

    same beat as Dear Mama' writtin by Pac...


    Dear mama - dad was a bad man got locked up
    got out still thuggin - got glocked up
    the pain in your eyes i could feel it deep in my heart
    never wanted to depart, but I had to dart
    got deep in some serious-shit
    caught up wit a thug, now im delerious-wit-it...
    Im missin u more then you think
    I know you shed tears when you blink
    and it brings ya down, but listen ta me keep ya head up
    never give up - it'll never end ~ less u stop fightin
    now im out and our bond tighten'd..


    Hook:
    Mama what ever happens
    we all got mishappens
    you could neva disapoint me (never)
    Happy you brought me into the world as your son...
    (I love you)

    Mama your appreciated*pause*
    i know when i smoke you hate-it
    its iriate, aint it?, so i quit.. cuz my love is stronger
    Girls come friends come they go, your here longer....
    Moved out - started hustlin
    bustin me, cuz the things I do...
    But mama I love you..
    I pay your rent-and get you what u need
    just keep runnin' neva stop...
    cuz you the top of the tree top
    Girls left me i looked twords my glock,
    bout to pull the trigga, but my inna nigga
    respect you so much i couldnt find it in me
    but i was your offspring, and i couldnt pull it and bring you to your knees again...

    Hook:
    Mama what ever happens
    we all got mishappens
    you could neva disapoint me (never)
    Happy you brought me into the world as your son...
    (I love you)
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  2. November 29th, 2003, 10:49 PM #2
    LoCo
    LoCo is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    Chicago.
    Age
    40
    Posts
    377
    Battle Record
    0-1
    upp
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  3. November 29th, 2003, 11:45 PM #3
    LoCo
    LoCo is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    Chicago.
    Age
    40
    Posts
    377
    Battle Record
    0-1
    upp
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  4. November 30th, 2003, 12:11 AM #4
    LoCo
    LoCo is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    Chicago.
    Age
    40
    Posts
    377
    Battle Record
    0-1
    UPPIN THIS SHIT HOLLA
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  5. November 30th, 2003, 12:17 AM #5
    Makkin
    Makkin is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    Chicago
    Age
    36
    Posts
    648
    Battle Record
    1-1
    Nice, good flow, I can feel it. You shuld make the song on audio if you already haven't.

    EDIT: noticed you were from chi-town also. where you stay at?
    Last edited by Makkin; November 30th, 2003 at 12:19 AM
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  6. November 30th, 2003, 04:43 AM #6
    LoCo
    LoCo is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    Chicago.
    Age
    40
    Posts
    377
    Battle Record
    0-1
    Im in humboldt park area, kedzie...
    i was born burbank projects, moved to cabrni green at like 9
    now im 19 and i lvie in humbolbt were u at
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  7. November 30th, 2003, 11:28 AM #7
    Spike Sanders
    Spike Sanders is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title! Spike Sanders's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    The Fucking Moon
    Age
    36
    Posts
    150
    YO LoCo, wus^ nigga,this piece was deep, iwas really feelin it.
    the vocab was good, multis were good, and the flow was perfect it neva went off track. i give a 8.5/10.
    good shit my nigga PEACE.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  8. November 30th, 2003, 11:58 AM #8
    spokenoh
    spokenoh is offline
    microcosm spokenoh's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2003
    Posts
    2,930
    Battle Record
    1-3
    Awards Haiku Season Champion
    not a bad piece, i suppose.......it should be much longer, and there was nothing at all to the hook.......i guess what matters is that it had a good message for your mother, no disrespect.......could have been more of an effort......o well.....
    can I kick it?
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  9. November 30th, 2003, 01:22 PM #9
    YJ
    YJ is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title! YJ's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2003
    Location
    MTC, MD
    Age
    36
    Posts
    255
    kinda simple it was iight
    prolly not a good text piece
    but it would be dope on audio
    nice flow and a good message 4 ur mother
    7/10
    BEST OF YJ
    Holla at cha Boi
    Watch Me
    Eyez of a Young Nigga
    Can't Forget yall
    Luv sick
    I can't Believe It(RIP Denise)
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  10. November 30th, 2003, 03:41 PM #10
    noncentz
    noncentz is offline
    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Location
    j-ville florida
    Age
    43
    Posts
    5,352
    Battle Record
    7-14
    THIS IS A GREAT DROP IT PISSESS MEOFF ITS BEING SLEPT
    ON
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  11. December 1st, 2003, 05:27 PM #11
    LoCo
    LoCo is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    Chicago.
    Age
    40
    Posts
    377
    Battle Record
    0-1
    ty niggas for the reps... look for a collabo me n word and a few others doin
    holla
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Similar Threads

  1. Dear MaMa
    By thechozn1 in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: May 13th, 2004, 10:55 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Forum Rules