Regular Battle
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Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
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@EyeDealIstic
@mal diction
he's not showing; i can see it
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
You have plenty of others to smooch, so grab one and beat it.Originally Posted by mal diction
What is high- My battle loss record & my blood pressure.
What's not high- my win record or me.
Enjoy the rest of your day.
He cleaves to ball sacks… idolized to the point he pops ish
Snobbish. Leave dude with a idle I.. the way i drops stic
Last edited by miracle; May 30th, 2024 at 09:33 PM
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
Ok first to vote ��
Let’s start with the stuff I like
Eye: creativity, simplicity
Mal: layers of metaphors and a wild build on the punch.
Eye: he’s not showing; -me his dick I wanna- see it
It’s enough dudes for you to smooch, grab one and go beat it.
Dope twist to use a misquote wish I thought of that although creative I will say it’s not multilayered nor have a complex rhyme scheme.
Mail: He cleaves to ball sacks… idolized to the point he pops ish
Snobbish. Leave dude with a idle I.. the way i drops stic
The rhyme scheme is dope with a lovely choice of words, but that ending is flames. Leave dude with a idle I when I drop stic
A idle eye like a lazy eye then when “eye drops” stic phewwwww nah this is the lyricism I like.
(Idle I stic -eyedealIstic)
My vote for harder punchline better rhyme scheme and amazing personals @mal diction . This was a hell of a battle tho both came with something. I would give individual awards to eye and mal.
Eye : 6/10 punch 6/10 scheme 9/10 creative , mal 9/10 punch 8.5/10 scheme 8.9/10 creative.
Last edited by FaQEyeReddit; June 1st, 2024 at 06:38 AM Reason: Left something out after rereading
FAQ - pronounced fack…
Eye or E.Y.E - divination (seek knowledge using computers)
Reddit- A web “sight” with frequent asked and answered questions.
it should read Fa, Q, I read it for kicks
Mal had the stronger bar. Eye was a little to simple n nonchalant .. Mal hit a little harder
Vote Mal
who is ghostwriting for Mal? this bar was dope. leave dude with an Idle I was fire and still works for me to recognize him as "stic" when you say you will drop the suffix. Eydealistic has a simple but funny bar. not enough to take this week.
v/Mal
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Mal wins 3-0
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