God level... Not even close, decent piece, rhyme scheme was basic, nothing extra, also this ain't a battle thread.. Open mic ain't for that shit, but that being said it was ok, you have room to elevate for sure, structure was ok, short piece, nothin advanced, work on multis, they will definitely make your rhyme scheme a little more advanced, for what it was it was ok.. Definitely keep elevating and working on your vocab, multis, try incorporating some wordplay and metaphors. Stay elevatin yo.. ~1~