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Heart Break Andy
.Prime.
6 Bars
30 min to finish up
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Last edited by A.T.; July 13th, 2011 at 04:42 PM
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Ah! look at this wack rapper tryna write raps
About as useless as the shit your parents used for a "night cap"
Watch as the fags gassed just watchin me as I run laps
You got these readers as gassed as popped tires on a bike rack
Yeah my bars are fuckin tasty but please do not try to bite that
I call 'em king kong lines, you're the bitch screamin in my tight grasp
The thought that you might last is stupid ,and whys that you might ask?
Cause your rhymes are as broken up as the weed in your pipe glass
See I am one of the realest to murder mics amongst the masses
Fuck a burial casket, I'll rock the diamonds made outcha ashes
Any remaining pieces get eatin with kitchen cutlery
Grab a platter cause this happens when any rappers tries to fuck with me
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Easy....
Black card with no limit swipe it and charge a drop//now my wardrobe flyer than a Harlem block//trying to teach you mothafuckas bout balling ock diddy bop with Attitude in my Bally shoe//the alchemist with a prodigy like havocs crew//we blast the tool no asking and snatch your jewels//the Greek god body was baptized in holy water that's why I get chastised//the bad guy who smokes good weed in a black 5//act fly keep buying chains your boats gonna cap size//so....lace up your timbs//and get ready to run cause the hollow points in the gun taking off limbs//I take a break from lifting weights in the gym//to step outside and exhale purple haze in the wind//I'll smack your fitted cap backwards and break up the brim you mothafuckas got no chance there ain't no playing with him//every 8 bars I go and buy 8 cars//straight raw rap star blowing up like napalm//You fags are funk flex you dropping straight bombs//I kill kids beat down dads and rape moms//I'm just joking don't be so sensitive stay calm. Way too tired for this
Sorry about last night prime I keyed that fucked off my syrup prescription lol
Could barely keep my eyes open
I'm happy with it tho
Keep upping people need to vote!!!
prime came down harder hiting than hb andy and better flowing his hole stucture was better
i like
ye you got these readers gasped as poped tires on a bike rack...
v/Prime
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You guys need to learn a thing or two about flowing
I couldn't hear that on beat. I write everything so u can actually flow it
But yea I agree I barely went at him
I need to take time to get to know the members more
So I have some kind of subliminals to use
Bump
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Good battle. HeartbreakAndy i felt like you was telling a story and not battling your opponent. Man you got some good flow you just need to drop some decent punchlines.
.Prime. you could have execueted your punchlines better but your verse was strong enough to take the win.
v-.Prime.
NIGHTMARES
Prime: Definitely came at ur opponent with punches and ur last three bars didnt feel like they were directed towards the opponent
HBA: My dude no hate but ur drop was more for an open mic piece. I like ur skill n shit but in a battle use punches towards ur opponent wheter it be personals or nameplay or just a basic punch with sting u feel me???
MVGT: Prime
you cant do this shit bro, less you wana get DQ'ed, read the rules, dont say that you think they need to learn, deal with it, we all do when we battle, just up it
Prime:nice punches, a little rocky at first, but good job/ could have gone harder, not alot of personals, could have used his name against him,
HBA- like the other saids, its not a diss with no good punches, not bad though nice open mic, its is a big advantage having a personal on somebody, but just make up creative insults
^prime won,
not a great battle...
prime came with better attempts, structure was betta and actually had some punchlines in there...heart break andy's structure wasnt that good, lackin punchlines, nothing towards your opponent even worth mentioning
vote - prime for a less weaker verse
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