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    May 09

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    The best this month gets into the RI's best
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    Re: May 09

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    This perfection of a symmetry being,
    such sudden beauty at a glance,
    exaltation of life chanced like
    rose in bloom, gloried, glorified
    such glory danced.
    .
    .
    .
    A youthful in full fine
    quality, living life upon
    societies request, dressed as
    mother natures best, flawless -
    pristine beyond a point,
    clear clean and fresh,

    as crystal as the spring from
    mountain streams, such
    energy, unstoppable in its quest,
    to guide the guarded narcissistic eyes
    of admiration, furtively to the
    soul regarded blessed.

    The bitterness reacts, claims the exile
    of his beauty, invites the darkness from
    his blood-stained heart,
    self imposed upon its cruelty,
    now a tortured soul unforgiven,
    on the rack and pinion of his conscience,
    fake upon his stubborn words he told in jest
    at the devils behest, begs no chorded reprieve
    from disability's rejection.

    Such sordidness of unbelieving faith,
    such powerful words he sold,
    striking off from lands for all,
    the lacking symmetry of features,
    torso, mind and limbs.

    Sorry!” sounds so muted,
    his sorry bounds his human mutant,
    sad forgotten skin deep blessing,
    forced in times from minds gone stark,
    returns his demon as his student,
    to learn again to pass to light,
    and follow once more his heart.

    his torpid state for having lost his
    faith, begs awakenings of his soul,
    a weariness from all forgot
    in youthful days, now war torn
    and abused.
    His vengeful words that forsaken
    all compassion, regretted firmly
    on his lips, seeks the best
    a poets forgiveness gives;
    a kind allegiance,
    from his angels kiss.
    Last edited by Alphaeus; May 27th, 2009 at 12:40 PM

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    Re: May 09

    sometimes things are not what they seem to be
    i look happy but inside im cracking
    try not to think about the 'used to be's
    something in my life is surely lacking

    she never really liked it when i drank
    her demeanor was always controlling
    maybe i should have given her more thanks
    because now im in need of consoling

    i thought she was restricting my freedom
    she didnt like my shoes on the divan
    she didnt appreciate my income
    in a way im kinda happy shes gone

    the television somehow seems different
    always brought me comfort when she was here
    nowadays it sounds sullen and distant
    how could it have ever given me cheer?

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    Re: May 09

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