$pitacular vs Barcotic

[SmokaJoka]

All that smack you talk, posting whiny shit.. I laugh when a dude ramble
I'ma crush you like I'm chain smoking a pack of the new camels
Sorry I was a couple minutes late, but freshness is my prescription
not a week old verse. which isn't the time span it's just ya description

vs.

You're done son, hittin the Deck, proving that your Heart's gone,
lookin like Arizona's coach.... the way you played your Cards wrong..


$pit was ok till the end and picked up...Bar came played to start off, I'm assuming because he hasn't learned what personals and nameplays are played against any of his new opponents...I almost quoted the mismatch line, but you made it so blatantly FL style because you were afraid no one in LLL would get it that I changed my mind...$pit, you need to scratch the 'beat your face in' lines...Bar, faceoff, 911, and the shoes lines were played


Vote - $pit

[Stat.]

This is how I see it...

$pit, you started off fresh with the lowes/home depot line, I'm just surprised I've never seen it before. Second lines was aight... Then you dropped a celibate line that I've also never seen done... I mean I've seen & heard celibate lines before, just never 'sell a bit' wordplay. The ones I've seen were like the one Wayne dropped in I'm me, and the one T.I dropped in I'm illy and neither of those had any reference to selling. So even though celibate lines aren't fresh, the way you used it was. The hand you the win line was ok a typical $pitacular style punch. The biggest fagot in the league bar was good... it was just a blatant statement that was mean. The camel line was alright and the closer was okay but it didn't hit that hard imo. Overall, I've read verses of yours that were way better then this. Didn't seem like you put forth too much effort. It was still entertaining to read though.

Quotes
You're finished. man all that fake ego will cease when I win this
bitch you'll hit new lowes like home depot went out of business
fuck text, you suck at RAP. you could make 10 cd's n' never get paid
I swear faggot if you sell a bit it's only cuz you never get laid
serious I'm tired of text. I'll stomp you n' after I bag it I'ma leave
shit I'm still mad at COM for giving me the biggest faggot in the league


Barcotic, you started off weak in the opener, and really played with with the name play on $pit, I mean think about it... $pits been battling for a long time with some real creative and talented people... don't you think $pit/Shoe shine lines have been used against him before? The 911 line was creative cuz I've never seen it done like that before but even though I did like it, I didn't like it that much. But the cardinal line was new... I liked it no matter how simple Chrit says it is. I thought the two thumbs up line was gay. I didn't like the under bars/down syndrome line. The miss match/mr. gas line was clever... but I didnt like the way you used it... And you finished with an okay closer. I thinks its obvious you belong in this league Bar, but I'm saying that based on your ability to write a verse, not on how you act in the chat thread.

Quotes
You're a fluke, old news, couldn't shock me with a stun gun,
n don't reach for the Nine.... you'd die before you hit 'one, one'..
You're done son, hittin the Deck, proving that your Heart's gone,
lookin like Arizona's coach.... the way you played your Cards wrong..


with that said...

Vote $pit

[Token]

You're finished. man all that fake ego will cease when I win this
bitch you'll hit new lowes like home depot went out of business
ha, I liked this.
I'm the Icon/Legend that never lost the hunger composin demise
You're the FL chump, who forgot when you're in front you expose your behind
okay
fuck text, you suck at RAP. you could make 10 cd's n' never get paid
I swear faggot if you sell a bit it's only cuz you never get laid
blah
If I try, you lose. n' now? I'm goin all out, know your place kid
nah I'll hand you the win. here hold it for me while I beat your fuckin face in
seen this concept before.., decent flip
serious I'm tired of text. I'll stomp you n' after I bag it I'ma leave
shit I'm still mad at COM for giving me the biggest faggot in the league
empty, blah
All that smack you talk, posting whiny shit.. I laugh when a dude ramble
I'ma crush you like I'm chain smoking a pack of the new camels
decent
Sorry I was a couple minutes late, but freshness is my prescription
not a week old verse. which isn't the time span it's just ya description
okay

vs

$pit can't Check me in the Boards, this kid is straight soft,
he didn't link me to a hockey game.... but I'll still hit his face off..
straight
Owning Bar? nah, he's nothing but a slave riding my Roots,
cuz anybody starting with a $pit.... ends up shining my boots..
nameplays are tough with people who been around as long as Spit, I haven't been here in a few years but I'm sure this has been flipped a few times.
You're a fluke, old news, couldn't shock me with a stun gun,
n don't reach for the Nine.... you'd die before you hit 'one, one'..
choppy
You're done son, hittin the Deck, proving that your Heart's gone,
lookin like Arizona's coach.... the way you played your Cards wrong..
Nice
You n your buddy are Feeling Deep on new, whacker boards,
Meters gives you two thumbs way up.... that extra loose ass of yours..
eh personal
RB said I'd lose, but compare our skill levels judgin by our best text,
$pit's always under Bar's.... like down syndrome kids doin bench press..
Nice
Cuz yo $pit, your rhymes might look really dope versus whack kids,
but this was a Miss Match.... her n Mr Gas left your hopes burnt to ashes..
Very creative, definitely needed a better set up for this to be fire.. but it's still Nice
Damn, your whole net family just lost you, n you ain't comin back kiddo,
you WERE married to Defcon on the Web.... til you made him a black widow..
blah


Overall: Here I am all excited to see a verse from Spit, since we go way back and shit, you know reading verses helps me get back to the level I need to be and to be completely honest, I was surprised. I guarantee Spit barely tried in this battle, I haven't been here but I fuckin guarantee that. Barcotic seems to the underdog and obviously put a lot more effort into his verse. Though the battle was closer than I'm making it out to be, Barcotic edged it with more quotables and a more solid verse.

Feedback to Barcotic: Work on your wording and your flow, it was pretty choppy throughout the whole thing, to me, your concepts got you the win here. If spit would've had just the same amount of quoteable lines, he'd won because his flows like it should.

Tough decision, V/ Barcotic.

[Sobe]

You're finished. man all that fake ego will cease when I win this
bitch you'll hit new lowes like home depot went out of business
fuck text, you suck at RAP. you could make 10 cd's n' never get paid
I swear faggot if you sell a bit it's only cuz you never get laid
All that smack you talk, posting whiny shit.. I laugh when a dude ramble
I'ma crush you like I'm chain smoking a pack of the new camels
Sorry I was a couple minutes late, but freshness is my prescription
not a week old verse. which isn't the time span it's just ya description

vs.

Owning Bar? nah, he's nothing but a slave riding my Roots,
cuz anybody starting with a $pit.... ends up shining my boots..
You're done son, hittin the Deck, proving that your Heart's gone,
lookin like Arizona's coach.... the way you played your Cards wrong..
You n your buddy are Feeling Deep on new, whacker boards,
Meters gives you two thumbs way up.... that extra loose ass of yours..
Cuz yo $pit, your rhymes might look really dope versus whack kids,
but this was a Miss Match.... her n Mr Gas left your hopes burnt to ashes..
Damn, your whole net family just lost you, n you ain't comin back kiddo,
you WERE married to Defcon on the Web.... til you made him a black widow..

looks like barcotic took this.. spit came a little played especially with the hand you the win line

v/ barcotic

[Chrit.]

$pit doesnt vote.

Barcotic wins.

Barcotic 1-0
$pitacular 0-1