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  1. January 29th, 2009, 02:17 PM #1
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    Curse of Sympathy

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    Curse of Sympathy

    give & give & give and constantly gain nothin'/
    My eyes are wide open to easily spot bluffin'/
    Got my game face on, and holding a Royal Flush/
    Should i fold like usual or show them cowards i crush/
    Most catz would say "crush them niggas and get paid/
    "snatch their girlfriends, fuck their feelings, get laid/
    I be like, HELL YEAH, cause Rogue Sha all hood/
    But then my conscience eyein' me like i wish you would/
    I turn a bad situation into a few bars in my rhyme/
    waitin' on this Karma thang but its takin' its sweet time/
    Been walkin' a red mile cause nothings ever all green/
    And if it is, it leads to fire where you burn e-ternal-lee/
    I feel for everybody cause i've walked in their shoes/
    And if i haven't, I usually can relate to the news/
    Especially with women & money, cause i've had hard times/
    Can’t rely on anyone but myself and my rhymes/
    Don't know where im gonna be, but i know where im at/
    I know where i wanna be, turning my dream into fact/
    I was never good at arithmetic, but im staring at stats/
    I'm hungry enough to eat, but not hungry enough for snacks/
    Just trying to live this life, but weighted down by empathy/
    Only Demons are blessed with curses & mine is sympathy/
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  2. January 29th, 2009, 02:18 PM #2
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    Re: Curse of Sympathy

    my 1st drop in open mic feedback would be appreciated
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    Re: Curse of Sympathy

    flowed pretty good could've used some multis..............rhyme scheme was pretty basic

    vocab was needed at some points.............

    not bad but not great.........................

    keep at it man........................
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    Re: Curse of Sympathy

    good flow
    liked the poker reference

    stay up
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    Re: Curse of Sympathy

    Got my game face on, and holding a Royal Flush/ that was your best,

    Don't know where im gonna be, but i know where im at/
    I know where i wanna be, turning my dream into fact/
    im feelin this bars, so real, the futers so random, only knowin where you are at the second

    keep working on you multis stay up, overall good drop
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