Demonic Thoughts

[NOH]

Erase The Basic.. u can see me behind the Face Of Racists
with a Taste That Tastes Of blood of Prey Nd Razors..
so i Stay Displayed For the private eyes who Wish To See
their veins Stick To Me like Chicken Grease.. Sit Nd Freeze
on the curbs of streets and i haunt their Useless Desires
from Boostin Some Tires to re-up and Use Up The Fire..
True I'm A Liar.. but its a solar eclipse, i'm Blockin The Light
get fiends Coppin The White and puttin Rock In Their Pipe
then venom spews, he Stands And Hit Up All Of Ur Faces
crazy actions.. not derived from Analytical Explanations..
i'm the dirt on ur jacket that keeps u Lookin Like A Bum
i am the Bullet In Ur Gun.. when u Pull It On Ur Son
my speech is useless ambition.. i choose to Keep U Alive
make u need to stand in the kitchen.. ur Sleep Is Deprived
so i create dreams.. and input nightmares To Haunt You
but remember..when ur warm skin hits that cold air I Got You..
Dropped to Your Knees Behind the Spirtual Pews...
And Guns Ring off Just to show You Whos New...
Overshoot the stars Your eyes in blood tears..
As The Demonic Thoughts Behind to Appear...


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[Dose Blotter]

The First Half Of this was done really well, but at the point "my speech is useless ambition.. i choose to Keep U Alive" It kind of fell off..You got it back with the spiritual pews part..
I give it a 7 out of 10..The Flow was excelent..The multies were on point, vocab was good. And imagination was great, It just kind of lost pace at that part imo..Anyhow Good Shits