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    Whitered Society Revisited

    Withered Society Revisited

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    A nation is a society united by delusions about its ancestry and by common hatred of its neighbors.

    -William Ralph Inge (1860 - 1954)


    I see the scripted visions of mindless missions, men killing politicians
    Wishing for a brighter day then the one given, crying as their living
    And their children starve, Chaos carved from the history books, I’m shook
    As I take another look, I see hooks, glued to the mouths of the weak, suited animals growl
    Howl happily to master, “look what I found on the prowl”
    A poor African mother trying to feed her babes
    before the White mans solution kicks in, and she dies of aids
    The truth fades into the bloody mist, someone has to die at the expense
    Of a man made bliss, named America God blessed the USA?
    And allowed the mother land to rot and decay?
    Then God is false like my countries sense of unity
    And I spit as his favoritism of our corrupt government of mutiny
    I see the fat king, or CEO of business, enjoying the champagne he’s sipping
    In comparison of, a young man gripping exposed ribs, as life is slipping
    Away like the notion of days of equality, and Hope ……………
    .consumed I stand boldly as the monster swallows me
    I will destroy the evil in this withered society and I hope you follow me


    We live in a society of victimization, where people are much more comfortable being victimized than actually standing up for themselves.

    -Marilyn Manson


    God exists no more, nothing but an old myth
    Jokes and scary stories told in the mist
    No one will survive the bloodbath that is coming
    The ground you walk has betrayed so no use in running
    Things twisted, seeing what you hear and feeling what you see
    "God bless America" He can't do anything for he hath deceased
    For the monsters that come forth in the night, and day
    Eating, feasting upon humans until they all dismay
    I would pray, but to whom i ask. There's no answer
    So i hence forth towards the beast, as a man
    Human being, ready to kill any monster that stands
    The world is at an end, so i must enable the inevitable
    I hath been swallowed by the beast, its incredible
    Still alive, in the belly and ready to do some deadly damage
    Drop this beast, end the massacre, but Satan has damned us
    The leader of the pack, shall be slain next in my path of destruction
    Alas i am killed, stepped on, and i see pearly white gates, can this be trusted?



    What can you say about a society that says God is dead and Elvis is alive?

    -Irv Kupcinet

    "That It was Withered and is no longer, a valid conception."


    The End
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    Re: Whitered Society Revisited

    whoever wrote that last verse in bold killed it..
    very complexed and dynamic flow..

    the first verse was raw too..
    word usage was great..

    on the real i liked this open-mic piece as a whole..
    both verses were well constructed and put well with the topic..

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    Re: Whitered Society Revisited

    how could you disgrace our master piece with something of this sort...how dare you..I'm not even going to leave feed..I feel disrespected.

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    Re: Whitered Society Revisited

    LMAO at master piece Lek, it was dope then but either of us could kill it now i asked you if you wanted to collab on it and you was like how about not, so i was like okay, and hooked it up with ascend.

    but up for feed.

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