Yeah this was a well put together collab and you pulled it off nicely.You didn't go for the complexed read thank gos because i'm sooo fucking tired right now, but you went for a nice simple approach with some beautiful wording.Cry to me you seem to be improving as a writer big time.Full of fresh ideas that always keep me reading.You are one of few writers that I think drop consistantly.Bell the same goes for you....you have been writing some cool pieces these days but you yet have to become concictant, but hey I can see that coming soon if you keep at it.Nice read guys, and I actually read this a while ago just never got around to feeding it.oz
-Dyl