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Thread: Slippin' of the deep end

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    Slippin' of the deep end

    My mind, in time, is dissolving
    Parasitic Creatures lurk,
    Through hidden doors, crawling

    Corruption and Destruction
    Knowledge depleted,
    Impossible Reconstruction

    The building of knowledge hit
    Peaceful mindstates shattered,
    Destroyed by terrorists

    Sane? Never again
    Damnation hosts my mind
    Only cure, a trip to heaven

    Gun ready to spit in my face
    As insanity try's to speak,
    I kill myself to end the pain

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    wow, this was pretty good yo, you had nice creativity and I see how the poem grew throughout to poem. Words were meaningful. good piece
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    bump

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    Bye bye black bird Poeta Demonio's Avatar
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    Three poems open. Closed.
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