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[.Mack.]

I read the rules and ect but if this violates any rules my bad. I think I followed them correctly. Anyway, I'm taking a break from paper, sketching, painting ect and coming back to computer graphix. I am still rusty and in the act of elevating. If anyone can help me out or give me crit that would be nice. Here's a cover I did using Macromedia, no bruses or texture. Made from a stock though but if you look closely the stock is EVERYWHERE in the pic. (font) Yea it's simple but my art teacher said it has a good concept but needs work. Any help would be greatly appreciated. And i'll post some other graphix also thanks.

[LyricallyInclined]

its str8, i like the theme and the text, the parental advisory sign isnt very good i would recomend you get a different one, a smaller one

[.Extract.]

i thik its all the empty space at the top that makes it look un done...but everything else is cool.

[LyricallyInclined]

wuts up jay

[TeK-NiK]

Word @ Jay & L.I
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Looks Empty But Still Good!
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Check Out My Showcase!

[Proefficient]

word at jay n L.I,any way the mixtape is gud its just the empty space like jay pointed u should probally put stars their and shootin stars and them space rocks lolz well im feelin the rest of it and the text n theme its all str8 and holla at my showcase homie and holla at my showcase homie

[TeK-NiK]

Get On MSN Hoe!^^

[Dope]

its str8 famz

[DaHustlaBoy]

really basic aint feelin it it needs alot of work go chek out others for reference read tuts

[Sir Cedrych]

dope shit little brother.

[White Guy]

It's really nice actually

[~SILENT~]

yea it is pretty nice. im feelin it.

[detremental.]

This is good with the blend and everything but I think it would have been that much hotter if you added alot of stars to it and made stars that shine more than the rest create a mic or something. RThat would have been hot. good work overall though. just looks like it's missing something. keep it up.

[.Mack.]

Thanks for the feedback everyone and yeah i've been making graphix for a long time I just stopped making them to focus on school and grades. Here's an updated version. I didnt want to add too much to the top because I want it to go simple then get more complex and not be to busy or contrast.

[detremental.]

Now it looks a whole lot better man. Good work. The stars add a real good touch to it. keep it up man.