Just Nature-That Poetry Kid

[Spakz]

Just Nature
That Winter Breeze,That Island Seek
Walking Autumes plank,When Leaves That Speek
Tall Trees,When That Leaf Starts to Ground
& Spring Blooming,when Flowers are Found
ButterFlies the Day,and that sensation smell
Like when Water Stills,when it just Wales
animals mate,while humans out that date
& Poetry Flows,like rivers hit states
Beautiful Things,like wonderful Dreams
when lines have rhymes,and it schemes
Pictures that lye,make hundreds of words
& the louder you are the less you are herd
Birds that Churp,Suthes The Nerves
& Three over 1,is always broken into thirds
Earth is a World,Place that meets Wise
Its Just Nature to Find Another Suprise

-That Poetry Kid,Spakz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=259687
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...27#post3705827

[Dat-Kid.]

this was a good OM...very short and simple....it made me feel like i was out in the nature and smelling everything out there...real good keep it up

[Spakz]

yeah it was a quick one but i packed in some good metaphores to keep this shit up and i got a Story comn out called Non-Human Hit That When I Get Active again its go be hot

[Spakz]

uppin....................