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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248581
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The thought of losing you hurts me cant you understand
That I need to be with you but it seems your the number one demand....
Caught between friends and love, them and me
You want me a way, but this is all I can be....
Why must we get bombarded by comments from others while I'm
Lost in a place where hate wins, and love gets smotherd.....
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.Major League Gaming.
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can i have at least one reply
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this was really short. i liked the whole subject. nice structure, concept wasn't that clear to understand. but i think you would of done better if you wrote more
5/10
Short yes.....still it pratically smolders with emotion.....it can fit any mold doesn't need to be translated in the terms of boy loves girl etc etc.........heartfelt with a daring and risque approach at structure.....could be expanded a bit.....could use a little more flourish if you will but not bad...........thank you.....P
I liked it. It was very short, and I felt that you can express a little more in here but overall it was good.
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