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Thread: Freestyle(FEEDBACK PLEASE)

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    Freestyle(FEEDBACK PLEASE)

    Do y'all know what time it is when everybody game
    is everybody else's hustle and everybody's shame
    is somebody else's blame, whatever I became
    I did it with hot rhymes and a lung full of flame
    I never refrain, from loadin up and takin aim
    Like chicks flows are different, I never cum/come the same
    My mic will be the dame, written or off the brain
    I show up with my chest pumpin hard like Notre Dame
    I lose then I regain, hustle is in the vein
    I'm drinkin protein shakes to muscle up the brain
    In the black Chevy Suburban sippin champagne
    with champagne, dick out doin the damn thang
    We movin in the fast lane, with them black thangs
    On the way to the Bronx, to do the ski-mask thang
    I don't know what's so funny cause I ain't laughing
    The part is for a dead body, guess who's casting

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    no freestlyes in om........p.s. elevate ur shit....

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    ahhhhhh shit,









    Wackest shit i've ever read dawg
    Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
    Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//

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    wateva who carez what you tihkn homie no hate

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    Ey, you did tha same shit to be, playa.


    p.s. Did you check my verse to you? Its called "In The Zone", it was closed becuz its to fuckin "violent".
    Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
    Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//

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    Yo, your as Wack as it comes jo', you fuckin critize otha people and insult their shit harshly, but look at you! You tha last person to critize anotha lyricist, your shit is Kindergarden shit.
    Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
    Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//

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    crazt you dont want none homie so shut da fuck up b4 u get merked

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    awwwwwwwwW shit, Dr.Seuss is being offended.


    Bring it, show me your elementary raps! I haven't laughed today!
    Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
    Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//

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    Right here, drop your diss verse to me. You already read mine to yours right? So you know what i had to say, Now let me read what you have to say.


    p.s., if you do choose to diss back, your commitin a rap suicide. Everyone WILL laught at you!
    Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
    Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//

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    iight bet bitch this a new beef right here

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    It aint even a beef. Its like me and my homies on Halloween, paintballing little 9 year olds for their candy bags!


    This is exactly tha same type of shit, your t ha lil' 9 year old. How Tha Fuck Kan U Kall This A Beef Jo'? It has to be competition,





    p.s. dont bring your imaganation friends in this, your "thug life niggaz" crew, [lol!, thats a made up crew by him].
    Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
    Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//

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    wdf u talkin about the only crew i got is UnderDogz bitch

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    You wanna battle me?
    Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
    Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//

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    plus the only reason you beefin and tryna shit on me iz cuz i gave you a bad feedback suck it up nigga it happenz to everybody

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    Dude, its not only tha insult feedback you gave, but its cuz of who u r. What if Benzino critizized 2pac? lol!
    Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
    Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//

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