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    You've Earned a Custom Title! O'rigi's Avatar
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    Where I'm From

    Chorus
    People be asking where I'm from(X 8)

    Verse 1
    Well I live in Va, But I hail from Bedford City
    Where folks with money, Considered to be P. Diddy
    Broke people without money, Are consisered crumbs
    The section 8 residents, Are living in the slums
    When someone gets murdered, Is once every 4 years
    The victims and the convicts parents, Will be shedding tears
    In the commonwealth, They take crime very seriously
    Depending on how much money you pay, Can help you, Avoid the E.C.
    The victims folks put a plak on the ground, Too poor for a headstone
    The jobs around here don't pay enough, To live in a suffient home
    Paint chips off the wall, Soon as you move in
    You got a toddler running around, So you hope they don't fall in to his hands
    If it goes into his mouth,Then you'll call the President
    Sue the landlord, Or whoever owns that residence
    Cuz if your toddler, Has to die a yong death
    Everybody gonna feel the pain, That's flying from you breath

    Chorus

    Verse 2
    I'm not well known around here
    Cept my clique and some girlies, I know around here
    They my inspiration to continue, What I do
    For those who don't feel, where I'm coming from, F.U.
    The beat you hear in the backround, Was made by me
    The rapper around these parts, That goes by Crone
    Which is me, Can you see
    T.A.L.A.N.T.E.D.A.N.D.G.I.F.T.E.D.
    Been doing gigs, Since the fifth grade
    Don't care, If I get paid
    Long as I got , My street credit
    Never be in debit, Since my card is debit
    Take you anywhere that you, Wanna go
    As long as you can interpert, The place in my flow
    Humiliation on a CD, Didn't stop me
    It filled my somach but I need more, Me hungry

    Chorus
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    Last edited by O'rigi; October 19th, 2005 at 08:15 AM
    I'm too fresh to be stale

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    Newbie SurpurbSkillz's Avatar
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    the chours needs more to say man, str8 flow, need help wot ur concept, fix ya StRuC

    3/100
    THE TRU BOOK

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    Seriously^^^^^^^^^^^^3/100
    and its goona get closed
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    :grinch:

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    Still in the grave Johnny 6-feet's Avatar
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    Stop backseat modding and freeposting.^^

    This needs 2 links to 2 open mics you've left decent feedback on or this will get closed. Read the thread at the top of Open Mic if you don't know how.

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    this was good but as they sed it gonna b closed

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    tjb
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    the song is tight cuz

    yo the song go hard keep flossing!!!!!!!!!!!!

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