Ant Mentality.

[TwixSin]

Ant Mentality

discrimination the worst of a nation added to the suppression
regression of killing each other overbearing this slow dissection
for an erection the blood and honor leeched clean, society's fiend
the hate to discriminate on a racial caliber, not unseen
our country starved lean for unmoral action attacks addicts
meth and coke heads minds, easily warped, drug magic
impossible to eradicate or thwart seeks out the soul
control the devil dances with'n strings of the puppets black hole
sure where ready to evolve... we can't handle our own brains
insane red blood, white and black mixed now officials are ticked
hate crimes turn to killer with intent Diabolically ravaged and clicked
the savages of the street mentality tear away life, drama and strife
plenty of hopes and dreams ended by the knife, masquerading emotion
the notion of a beast unkept to problem solution, just adds contribution
the chaos of destroying our own human, nature, skin color bias
they try like the rest to infest crawling into young heads
"screaming those fuckers usta buy us!" "lie to us"
i swear if i hear chug or nigger one more time, I'm a convert to smashing skulls
a slow lull, dust off the dirt that settles, even if nothings been settled, dull
ill sit on this ant hill and watch them kill each other over a territory or squad
not my theory, but a magnifying glass could turn Nagasaki playing god

[TwixSin]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...78#post3012778
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=224778

[D.V.R.a.k.a.M.C.]

I was feeling this piece. I think it just dope. I felt the emotion. I like the wordplay. The sturcture is good. It flowed well. Overall this was a very well put together peace. 9.5/10

[Swift Death]

Yeah yo, played concept, but I saw you throwin a couple flavors and flipped the story to hit the illy shit.

Nice job, ant concept - diff. colors. Pretty well explained too, I enjoyed reading, nice job yo.

[TwixSin]

thanks for the feed... up.

[The Vortex]

insane red blood, white and black mixed now officials are ticked
hate crimes turn to killer with intent Diabolically ravaged and clicked

nice

in fact most of the piece was dope and subject was delivered with clarity and str8 vocab.. nice touch on on point internal rhyming...


ill sit on this ant hill and watch them kill each other over a territory or squad
not my theory, but a magnifying glass could turn Nagasaki playing god

excelent ending

lots of coo references and quote and dope tightness of the verse format... fosho

a way above average pice

good food for thought

check out Brainwashed in my siggy

stay up
pz

[the_madhatter]

There was a lot of edge and emotion into this, especially leading up to the end. You calculated on the multis and still was able to make the piece poetic. Plus the imagery was key as well. Great job!

[sILLable]

prety dope twixn...you keep comin with tha dopeness....i cant really complain on any of the aspects of this peice..i enjoyed it ...all around....very dope..keep droppin tha hottnes....and check out tha link in my sig titled "when the sky falls"...id appreciate it.~1~

[TProphet]

very nice

everything was on point

as already said this type of piece been done before but you made it stand out and gave it a lil originality

again, very nice

rtf?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=224903

[Jawn Raw]

this is really mad poetic here, very nice multiples but try n use some internal multiples man that would make it sound even more dope, you had a intense flow, good stucture, nice imagery, emotion was very well used in this piece just nice to read another one of your drops twix, good job man keep doin ya thing this was a tight joint keep it up.

could ya rtf in my new piece frustrated intensions, link in the sig. soon

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[ILuvDrinkingHOTCum]

so u no ur alphabet as demonstrated in ur very poetic enthusiastic raps

[ILuvDrinkingHOTCum]

holla at ya 4 1 of da 1st negros 2 learn his alphabeta alpha beta repeat

[This Aint Beef]

holla at ya 4 1 of da 1st negros 2 learn his alphabeta alpha beta repeat

again?... damn... you do this on every open mic or something?

was really feeling your word play in this, you used an expansive vocab. your use of multies was also good to see. nice drop.