Dope drop had superior vocab and the message was powerful. I liked the emotion you put into it and I also liked the complexity of the verse. Could have used a couple more multis to help it flow better, but other aspects made up for it. The topic is original and you brought alot of your own style to it, which I like. Imagery was really nice, so was the structure all the lines were of proper length in relation to the preceding lines. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece very original and complex
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