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[moogaface]

Ay im back like cocaine/
u cant really describe what fuels the flame like propane/
assed up/ masked up on dope brains/
dudes taking they life like they name was cobain/
all i do is fuck hoes and smoke haze/
remain in a state of washington like spokane/
these days u gotta stay focused/
they all voltures/ keep a low brim wit the toaster/
act right and shine like flashlights/
keep yo mind on ya money and keep ya jab tight/
old head said when i was a youngn/
before i had my arms wrapped around like i was huggin/
im not buyin what u sellin me/
game recognize game so its real to a melody/
now watch me breeze past/
and kick the flow out like its a pass from steve nash

[SunSpit]

Diz was an alright drop. I liked da flow at some points n da multi's which made da flow betta if u kno how tah read it correctly. Juss up ur flow n vocab n u good. Nice drop tho. Keep droppin n elevatin.

[:.Apollo.:]

i never knew cocain left, lol... its been here for Ages...
anyways, this wasnt that great of a drop, but props for tryin...
Flow, Structure, and vocab needs elevatin...

[:.Apollo.:]

stay up and keep droppin, you'll elevate sooner than you know it...
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[:.Apollo.:]

oh yeah... peep my OM please, you to sunspit if ya don't mind

[sILLable]

yes....atleast you tryed....but you need to elevate ...and read tha rules before you post anything in here..~1~

[moogaface]

Good Lookin On The Feedback Ima Keep That In Mind And Keep Posting And Replying. Jea.