very good piece...
i've gained a new respect for you...
the bad must always precede the good...
minor grammatical errors...a few mispellings, and misuses...they should be corrected...
aside fromt hat, this was very nice...
nice pace and cadence...
commanding voice and speaker...
fairly intelligent, fairly witty
nicely constructed lines, meanings were all consistent...
proper diction, very nice syntax....
very above average...
nice poem...