Elevated Minds (PP-HNR collab)

[Ceaseless]

1st part Ceaseless (PP):
Undirected emotions, angry most of the days and...//
So crazy insane, so goddamn impatient//
Not admittin’ the fact that I seem deranged but…//
Maybe it’s normal I was an angry teenager//
Then it came to my mind I had to take a time-out//
I found the way to my heart that’s why I spit my rhymes now//
My state of mind flows through my pen writin’ lines down//
Hear what’s on a nigga’s mind now, so turn my mic loud//
Close your eyes and try to see more than dark emptiness//
Your walls of intelligence will collapse when you see how dense we live//
We act a fool for reputation but there ain’t no sense in it//
And if we don’t find no love we’re still able to rent a bitch//
I gotta get away from materialism, money and dimes//
I just need the essentials and music to keep me alive//
Elevation through patience is what’s makin’ my life//
I’m not yet enlightened but I got an elevated mind…word

Hook Ceaseless:
What do we find when we take the time
To take a closer look at what we got and what we want
What’s kept concealed and what is revealed
If we take a look at what we want and what we got

2nd part BeRLin`S BesT (HNR):
Through my ears to the brain, insaneness creates
I’m plain saneless, trainin’ my stainless brainwaves
Gain weight, plant grain in my membrane, collecting wisdom
I’m a wise kid with an infected system, I affect ya track-listing
Insisting on analisys, interesting terrorist with no scholarship
My skins colorless, I create paint through my linguistic, ZtiC’s a scholar kid
Skip the hollarin cuz I quit bothering with animated rhymes
Kidz spassing out behind the mic mean nothin to elevated minds
I’m celebrating lines, they so delicate, regulating shine
Stop speculating yup I’m infatuating time after time......after time
Blast a line, fuck aftermath I’m an intellectual statue ya half an ass
Try grasp the fact ya rhymes heinous
Containing plainness could never reach my mind status
I find failures like sand on a beach, u can’t teach the greates
Put ya hands on the street, I’m damned to impeach the fatal
Been blessed since God’s speech reached the navel
Label me elevated cuz I work the feather n cease the sabel.....n this ain’t a fable...

Hook Ceaseless:
What do we find when we take the time
To take a closer look at what we got and what we want
What’s kept concealed and what is revealed
If we take a look at what we want and what we got


Feedback I left:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154036
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154299

[noncentz]

i likes this but i think both should of hit 2 verses its true rep lacks little not your best work but definetly to be proud to claim its your work so mad love

[Ceaseless]

thx w~p...more?

[Ace of Aces]

had an awesome flow to it. both of you had a great amount of multies in your verse, neither seemed too forced or anything either, props for that. this was a great collab done by you two. the topic, i guess you could say is used often, but the fact that you had a chorus for it, made it obvious that you guys were going for something deeper, and thats exactly what happened. this was not only a fun read, but a deep one too. awesome hook to it. props to both. keep at it.

peACE

[Ceaseless]

^^thx son....
still open for more feedback juz leave a link and I'll peep ur's

[BeRLin`S BesT]

thx for the feedback fellas...much appreciated...once again good job ceaseless...this def turned out in a nice way....pz

[Howard The Duck]

i think the overall flow on this shit was great..this was really easy yo pick a flow too..and the wordin in ya lines was great as well...i think you chose a great topic..and you handled it well...your imagery was good...and the vocab and structure was fine...mad props too both of you on this..

[Ceaseless]

thx Bronze and ayyo Berlin I told the hook was okay, nah sayin?
uppin for more..leave a link fellas I'll peep ur in return...

[BeRLin`S BesT]

yea uppin this biatch for some mo.....pz

[BeRLin`S BesT]

yo quit sleeping on this...drop links and I will return da favor...pz

[Johnny 6-feet]

nice concept, seamless flow from both emcee's, as well as strong vocab and numerous well-placed multi's. ceaseless had some great vocab as well on this piece and berlin came with some real aggression.

great collab, well worth the read. keep posting guys.

if one of you could hit one of my pieces up id appricaite it.

[BeRLin`S BesT]

for the good of it...up....pz

[BeRLin`S BesT]

cats be ma sleepin on skilled artists....wake up.....pz