Do ya feel Me

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Momma Said know ya foes,
hold ya own an stay focuss son,
i spit every last breath
wit a tear or so,
hear no moe ears gon old,
i think that my years gon cold,
i fear my soul lord please help me,
all a nigga wanna do
is live right not wealthy.
shots knelt me..on my right hand,
why it gotta come ta this,
slumbs n strips where i hung
young n big -cant leave
cuz nigga i love tha bricks,
im amuned ta hurt,
im soon ta urk load up
shoot thru ya shirt,
uncle said loose the dirt,
but t then i gotta loose my worth,
i choose to burn light my fuse N fry,
used ta cry now i shed blood
cuz i refuse ta die,
i can see thru tha pupil eye,
salute tha gods cuz theese days
i gotta mute tha odds!

[F-Money Bags]

Damn i was feelin' this all the way....shit was nice and simple but had a good flow to it....good shit dog....keep dropin' and peep my shit in open mic...1

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Thanks for peep'n
yall I need more feedback

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[IllLyricalthaDon]

not bad...i did like how you stayed topic throughout tha whole thing...got me a bit confused on your flow pattern in tha beginning...overall pretty good...an if ya wanna battle ill see bout hookin somethin up...if itz aight wit you...1

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alright thanks for peepin hit me back on that battle ish dawg 1

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^^^^^^^

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^^^^^^^^^need more feedback

[•madd•Professor•]

this was aiight, tight flow, weird... nice rhymes, good concept and you stayed on it... peace dawg


signed,
~madd