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Thread: 1 Minute on Da KeyBoard!!

  1. #1
    DAARK
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    1 Minute on Da KeyBoard!!

    Ma Brain fermentz thoughtz that evoke, provoke and "stoke" tha flamez
    Flamez?? nigga tha onez that spew vocally, I can write spittagez jokingly
    Yet have niggz thinkin twice ta crack a smile~coldazz single parent child
    Brought in thiz place fa what?? bytches~dope~loot and ta buss nutz??
    Chea that'z what they think of tha average U know What!(think bout it)
    But am spittin fa all ppl whose probz can relate similar ta minez
    Don't "Have a Dream" but ma mind fuckin "blankz" from senseless krimez
    But I cyant talk cos I done did my 'durrt' and ma home ain't dirt
    Now in retro i see U can get ahead without doin a world of 'hurt'
    Shyt No choice but ta recline and analyze tha picz of life,
    how would 'they' paint me how would they do U
    when ur dead and gone will they really care ta remember you!!

  2. #2
    incarnation
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    this was just uhh... well, keep your 1 minute keys to your self... really, it hurts to read shit thats not worth reading... -5 out of 10

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

  4. #4
    DAARK
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    Quote Originally Posted by incarnation
    this was just uhh... well, keep your 1 minute keys to your self... really, it hurts to read shit thats not worth reading... -5 out of 10

    No one forced U ta read it trick .......but umm thanx anyway fa tha feedback ...and credz my bad I'll go do that shyt!!

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    That Shit Cray Chris Black's Avatar
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    Bleh. This may be cool in a real song but loses impact in text. Make your layout more reader freindly, and come with a more uniqe concept next time around. Keep writing, son.

    My Open Mic: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148031

    -W1
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    axis powers

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