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    -my Diary-

    -My Diary-

    A book i keep that helps me express
    my inner feelings that frees me from stress
    im blessed to write about my grief or valor
    lettin out all the problems i have stored
    for years to my self which are personal
    not only is it a diary its my journal
    couldn't bare to see others read it
    for it's important to have,i need it
    so i can cope with other shit that displays in my head
    which i write about every night before i go to bed
    its been said that this journal is what many posseses
    it can tell good or be writtin in personal fetishes
    which ever way it still keeps your thoughts secrets
    writing letters to your self even poetic pieces
    about sad,fond,or even your weirdest desires
    talk about the things that ignite or put out your fires
    dont need to be liars,express what intirely
    you want that makes you write in this diary
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    This was dope, especially from a fellow 'diary writer' (i call my shit a journal more manly) so i felt this piece more then some other people would, perfect structure, PM me the links to your other shit cuz i also loved that 'old man' piece

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    thanx man
    and i will when i write more pieces
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    ^hey you jacked The End's old sig pic but anyway....
    This was a well written piece, i liked the flow and you spoke your mind clearly the only thing that didnt connect with me is the topic because i dont keep a journal or diary. I could see where you were coming from and i appreciated your point of view but i just feel like i couldnt personally connect, nothing you did wrong, i just cant relate 1luv.
    Laying face down in the mainstream.
    Po.Ethics.

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    uppin this people come on
    gimme feedback and drop links ill peep yalls shit
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    this was a cool poem. it was average just for a content peice.
    it had a flow to it,
    thats also a cool thing about it because,
    my style is totally different considering i write in the 2nd person, well whatever you want to call it. lol.,
    umm, anyways, the topic is very Tooken, or in otherwords its been used a lot. but you,
    brought a different meaning to it, and it turned out well.
    good job. keep writing.


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