Drop when you can..
10 Lines..
30 mins from check in..
Drop when you can..
10 Lines..
30 mins from check in..
Checkin' in.... Good luck, Scriptious. But remember, I may have to spit tommorow.
Ahh just seen you check in..the time situations cool..count this as my check in..dropping in 30 mins..
Wheres the problem? I think its you hassling me for these vet hands..
..well here, ill provide you a sentence..
..dont fuck with the best lands
Your newly abused, why believe your something your not? get a clue!..
..cause when heads laugh, its at you!..
..thats when there truly amused
Whys God even trying? Its not like he’ll return back towards this earth..
..cause these punches leave him stranded..
..after travelling through to his birth
Are you illiterate, or cant you understand complexity through your eyes?
..cause every lines put you at a next level..
..where its left you to grow high
Now stay tuned, cause I publicize your death through announcing live..
..as my agendas knocking you far behind..
..so you end up back down in time
Aight, check it...
Newest addition to my crew spittin like that? That's kinda ridiculous
I mean, he's lost his own train of thought after God vs. Scriptious!
Newbish MC comin' in here, he hasn't won any battles with his shit
And it's true I was a virigin, till I smacked this pussy, the first I hit
Atempts wit, but we know Script is the product of what the dog bit
After it was digested, re-processed, and crapped out into dog shit
Tryin' to come complex with the text, leaves all his stupidity unseen
But then he checked dictionary.com to find out what complex means!
I battle newbies on the mic like you to teach ya a lesson thru the loss
But if u dunno by now u suck, I dunno how to get the message across.
Later
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Aight.
Script-You really came complex with this shit. Your flow was outstanding. Your structure was nice, it really set off this piece. I really liked the concept of the punches, killing him with his own name, nice touch. I really liked your verse, it was soemthing new from you. Great punches, overall 8/10
God-You had good structure. Your bars were a little bit too long which kind of threw off the flow but nothing too severe. Your punches were weak and you had alot of fillers. The only thing that stood out to me about this was your closer. You had a damn good closer here. Your vocabulary was below that of script. Your structure was below script because your structure threw off flow and his didn't. The mic line was weak, damn you came weak on this. Overall-5/10, you could've done better man.
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dis wuz a really good battle but i hav 2 say script because god didnt keep da same tempo throughout his rap.
1-0..Uppin for more votes.......................#3
Scriptious- Nice complexity of your punches. Through in a lot of personals that really hit hard about "god" and his crew. I liked the next level line, a played concept but the punch was new, the laugh at you line was witty, liked it a lot. The after traveling through his birth line was good, again, a little bit played but flipped nicely. But I didn't like your structure too much, it was hard to keep the flow going. But good job.
god- Ehhhh not nearly your best man. A "pussy, hit" line? Cmon man you know that's very, very played. Nothing spectacular, the opener, the wording was off I think, but you had a good concept. But that's the only real bar that was decent. You fell off from there pretty much.
Overall, vote goes to Scriptious for more consistent, hard-hitting punches. Much respect to both, peace.
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u all cant battle this is not what battlin is its when 2 people look each othre face to face and just flow and rip on each other oh yeah there is a beat. U all ever try to do that?
Yes we do you silly fuck..and this helps with punches..multies etc.. you know what they are faggot? keep talking shit you bitch..you would flow over a wave kid..