One rock
Broken in two
One side shatters to pieces, the other remains strong
Until it is thrown back in the garden....
One rock
Broken in two
One side shatters to pieces, the other remains strong
Until it is thrown back in the garden....
I'm not feeling this.
I dunno why either. Generally, I'm one who will be first to say "Less is more."
But that's not to say this wasn't good. Logically, I should be feeling this. It strips away all the unneccessary stuff, and just spits out a metaphor of simplicity.
I dunno, maybe I'm not feeling it because I have the flu. But either way, keep dropping.
~Islam~
Fairly simple. Does the job through a strong enough metaphor. Though on it's own as it is, it can seem a bit weak. Emphasis on can.
...resp...
I'm too secure to have a signature.
Oh.
really i like how you decided to show this. it was a nice metaphor, thou i too think it would be more effectful if there were more, but this is still great in its own way. shows a good and real umm lesson you oculd call it in a very simple, but different way.
~Tera~
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