Soldier

[YoUnG-sUsPeCt]

I Got Two Semi's Directed At Ya Face...
My Spit Burns Your Eyes When You Read It Worse Than Mace...
My Lyricall Bullets Aint Coming From A Gun...
There Comin From This Rap Game That I Just Won...

Chours(x2)
Im Rising Like An Elevator...
Elevating A Shit Load Of Levels...
Un-Stopable Like A Pac Playa Hata...
I Push To Many Peddals...
And Winn Shit Loads Of Murder Medals...

In This Battle Your Gonna Be An Out Cast...
So Jump On A House Raft And Set Sail...
Ima Burn You Like The King Of Rap And Smoke The Dust...
Let Me Just Say Your Gonna Be Ex Hailed...
Your Just Another Fat Ecentric Male...
Rymes And Punches Hittin Me Slower Than A Snail...
Lines Soo Long There Bigger Than A Fuckin Whale...
In Hale When I Spit And Sniff Some Deadly Gasses...
Your Real Name Is Prolly Robert Paulson Written Raps Cause You Raped Your Teacher And Are At Home For Expaulsion...

Chours(x2)
Im Rising Like An Elevator...
Elevating A Shit Load Of Levels...
Un-Stopable Like A Pac Playa Hata...
I Push To Many Peddals...
And Winn Shit Loads Of Murder Medals...

What Do Yall Think Of This!! Some Feedback Please

[Jet]

Your Just Another Fat Ecentric Male...
^^^
youre just another fat different male.......

work on vocab....out of context words kill a piece....

[YoUnG-sUsPeCt]

ya i know that shit was just something quick next time ill try harder that was really not my best

[Nexxt]

bLAoO...u couldent spit if ur life depended on it
J.k. i giv u 4/10

[YoUnG-sUsPeCt]

ya i know lol that shit was horrible