cameronj86 vs Mentally Kursed

[mc thrilla]

i thought cameron came wit the full package he had everythin ment came hard but not hard enought vote cam

[The End]

^ Bullshit votes don't count.. One sentence votes = bullshit votes.

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[Axe]

OK... i don't know why this was closed... i asked The End and he didn't close it... so i reopened it and set the polls with the honest votes.

[Mentally Kursed]

yea i asked him if u jus put he had better punches and flow count and he said no so i showed him it he took off roux vote and mc thrilla votes cus they were one line votes i told everyone you cant jus say betta punches *cough the first vote *cough* but thats how it went it should be 2-2 cus j dubya and rappad explained their votes

[Meks]

Tight battle props to both,
BREAKDOWN
Metas-Cam
Punches-Tie
Flow-Tie
Structure-Cameron
Wordplay-Mental
Vocab-Mental
Opener-tie
Multi's-Mental
Finisher-tie

VOTE=Mental 3/2..............
peace

[Dr.SeusS]

aIgHt...


Cameron's Flow was Better...(ryme Scheme)...the Punches Hit Better Too.
To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace
And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets

That Line was Your Best Line in My Opinion...

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Mentally Cursed, Your flow had some Good Wordplay..
Vocab was better then Cam's...But Punches Didnt STAND
OUT as much Too Me..
CLOSE BATTLE...


POLL VOTE-CAM..




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[Erupt]

i'll break it down

flow=both
Multies=MK
Personals=Cam
Vocab=Mk

Overall=VOTE MK

PROPS TO BOTH

I've seen numerous battles where you post crappy explanations... start explanin.
-Amby

[Born To Kill]

Well, this was close...

But I'm a toss this to Mental cuz he simply hit more often.

Cameron had a couple of filler lines that kinda cost him.
No doubt, the NYPD line was great, but it wasn't a diss.
The "kiddie porn" line was good, but, again not a diss.
The "bland/megaman" line was played.
I think everyone who's battled Kursed lately has used it.

Mental had no filler and hit the whole way along.

Flow: Mental
Punches: Mental
Wordplay: Cameron
Metas: Cameron
Multi's: Mental

Very close.
But...

Mentally Kursed

[8-off]

this was a good one, it feels better when the vote is 4 vs. 4

let me break it down......camreron punches were mostly on point, they were complex and thorough but some were too complicated, and others didnt make sense, and that "reachin for the wallet"line was pure ill, that had to be my favorite one of this battle, but your flow wasnt there, some strected bars and choppy shit

mentally kursed, you also had some good punches, they werent as hard as cam's but your deleveiry was well put, and some of your lines were played in that catergory, your flow was all there too, and i seen u threw some multis in there, but try to up your vocab, and wordplay, make da battle more interestin


vote=mentally, good shit to both, but his stuck out

[Axe]

Another crappy vote by COM opens the battle at 4-4. These kids need a final vote here.
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[CrazyE]

I'll break dis bitch down the right way , verse by verse ....

Cams 1stBar
Forget the facts you've gathered, Mentally Kursed's a typical gay man
He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan

( great opener , good rythme , personal , heavy punch , and funny as shit )

Metals 1st bar
Repeatedly eatin fruit loops is the only time he consecutive kill, commit color suicide by overdosin on purple pills//
Your from Bermy, this cereal killer robs “banks for sperm” givin him a reason to steal//

( Froot loops opener was kinda weak , However I got your meaning , and it was clever , even though it didnt come across the way you wanted it , yu might have been able to shorten this line to help the flow and still get yur point across )

1st Bar - Cam 1-0

Cams 2nd bar -
Mentally Kursed must be a "verb" cuz he's on my "to do" list for eliminating herbs
He's checking readers digest to make sure I aint stealing text cuz he's eatin my words
( Nice line cam , good personal , good punch , nice wordplay )

Mentals 2nd bar
Punches separate your jaw from your mouth and your heart from your chest//
Put you to rest, sendin “books” through your stomach so youll have “readers digest”//
(Lol , dont think yu were feeding off his verse , even though both bars contain Readers Digest , and you went 2nd , but yu masked it well , and turned it into a nice word flip )

2nd bar - tie

cams 3rd bar
Ya verse'll be far from perfect, even beneath the surface is bland
What the purpose of comin hard in verses if ya idol is megaman?

(lol , true it sucks he remooved the MegaMan pic , but I remember it being there , good personal , nice flow )

mentals 3rd bar
Your flow dont make sense like Helen Keller judgin a dance contest//
Like Cams the best, ill leave your chest caved in like Bin Ladin and terrorists//
( Hellen Keller lines are kinda over played , as with Bin ladin aswell , but it aiighht , nothing special )

3rd bar - Cam .....leading 2-0-1

cams 4th bar
I'm like Kazaa and kidde porn, on the computer... I'm nothing to mess with
Fuck a friendship, only way "i'm your "dog" is if you're dsylexic

( Great line here , dope shit , Dig it allround )

metals 4th line
Ill rip your face off they lay it on a ELEVATor so you can have a face lift//
Hits quick and swift, disperse a bullet through your brain so your thoughts shift//
( nice counter punch , good rythmes, but cams was harder )
4th bar - Cam

cams 5th
To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace
And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets

( Nice closer , ..... Rasheed Wallace , lol , black reaching for wallets , good shit )

Metals closer
Yours fists connectin is a illusion, punches leave you wit delusion, bruises on your face//
Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case

( Obviously we dont have to point out that he MEant FBI ,its pretty obvious , and its a tight verse , good closing material )

Closer vote Mentally Cursed

Summary - Good battle here , after my breakdown I vote for Cam 3-1-1 , but it was closer than that , both MCs came hard and demonstrated some dope skills , Fun to read , fun to judge.

Peace , CrazyE
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[BROOKLYN]

Originally posted by CrazyE
Closer vote Mentally Cursed

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POLLED IT WRONG, POLLS CHANGED
MENTALLY CURSED WON

-BROOKLYN

[Axe]

Originally posted by CrazyE

Closer vote Mentally Cursed

Summary - Good battle here , after my breakdown I vote for Cam 3-1-1 , but it was closer than that , both MCs came hard and demonstrated some dope skills , Fun to read , fun to judge.

^For The Closer... He Said Mentally Kursed Had The Better One... But Overall... He Voted For Cameron... Get It Straight Brooklyn... Cameron Wins This One.