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13th Disciple
Avalon
Check In By: Thursday...
Verses Due: Friday Evening...
Voting Ends: Sunday Evening...
Make Sure You Vote On 5 Battles...Blah Blah Blah...
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How the fuck am I 5-1... and battlin someone who's... 0-0... This is a bullshit match... fuck that... You've been fucked...
Ya brawlin..? Ya stupid... leave shots all in ya tunic
'Swhatcha get for tryna be a hero & havin the balls of a eunuch..!
13th... Av thought of ya style... our beef..? now you in my lime light,
this muthafucka bit the hand that feeds him... and every line that rhymed right...
your a Chyna dragon dude, your gay parade's the demonstration,
how all ya lines are all miss'es like when wife's on vacation...
I got this battle on lock... no one'll ride for a new guy with no pride,
if you think you MAY win... I got 11 more months on my side...
yea I saw the RB tourney when I registered... and didn't bother,
cause when I saw the 64 man challenge... thought it was a search for his father...
watch me give you achin bones... from this no fakin moans,
and 13th can go off shakin... right now... like vibratin phones...
look at his first personal... can't you see,
look closely it's the same one Mind Theory used to take the title from me... WHOA..!
Yea I lost to Evolve... that match I threw it... stop respondin,
but you're so wack... I'd win this... even if I rocket launched it..!
you're better for micro-wavs... the fuck you wanna do..!
^that's recycled heavily... but shit... come on 13th... it is only YOU..!
don't regret ya life... ya poor... but cheer up 13th,
I mean... you are so much of a fruit... you're chocked full of vitamin C..!
this guys trash... I won't even waste my ammo on his defeat,
Av'll put a 'rifle through the garbage' like bums tryin to eat...
^that's word play... remember I taught you all that I could,
you got detention for a week... now ya opener's all that is good...
Cat holds no surprises... cuz damn he's wack... imagine that
Ya fuckin bag of tricks is barely the size of a sandwich sack...
ever notice... he'll say he'll do 16... wind up with 18... *GASP*
and he's seen on other sites... afterwords his lines are edited fast..?!
Coolie's been here for awhile... so of course he's old news,
look... still tryin to master the style he started... 1/1/02...
Ya think ya the king dick... but I think you a goober
And you're at least 11 fuckin inches short of bein' the ruler..!
That's 32 lines... if the limit is 30 than... take 2 off...
Av...
AlieNation
..GrindHouse..
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u IM'd me said match 32,don't peep ur verse & try to lyrically top it
no need 2 feed i know ur steze & know ull prollyspit about rockets
or micro wav's....or defeat,or prolly sumthin that rhymes wit Coolie
but u stay gettin shoved & when u thought u was in love....u was
really suckin the dick of ur bully....
Me!..'member that?...point out the facts,bare in mind 3 weeks ago
bro....know why i see ur played punches commin....cuz u text slow
no personal hits in ur battles,thatswhy Evolve gave u the coldcock
again...i'll deliver the NOLAVA line...make u know ull neva be hot!.
stop!...give up the pen jots,at this point got more respect 4 knight
at least his punches has bite...this hemofeliac runs from his fights
^fact or fiction?..countless times checked in, then quickly ur ghost
fact or fiction?..then returned & recycled ALL ur punches the most
ur talent ceased & deceased..hystorected followed wit dormant...
but u still think ur big,look at his sig,cat cant even spell important
irony is funny,once thought u was ill, now infected and plain sick...
if i need pleasure thats quick..i'll just open & listen 2 ur soundclick!
pointless attempts at makin sense,i mean look at his sacred script
32 left in the league? Tone-E missed ya cuz u ducked at the picks
somebody quick!..go to open mic & review the lines of his drop....
u'll notice that verse has similarities to the verse thats on top....
i'll give u some props...since ur a master at things thats played....
& after seein ur girl Kendra...yup....i'm convinced that ur gay!......
whadda ya say?...go 32, cuz i already got u beat at this part.....
call it a draw?...cuz beatin u i'm startin to master this art!..........
like Napoleon Bonapart...ur little but ur head has gotten too big...
battle my son,both of yall play wit things other kids already did...
u wanted out of regime...wit no hate...i'll grant u those wishes....
u remind me of morbid...both write ghost & i cybered wit both of
yall bitches!.....
first it was fun....second it was aiight...now beatin u is gettin old...
i'll make this one stick,do a newbie trick, & defeat u in bold
blah......long ass key....its all good.......lets do this.....
Last edited by 13th Disciple; August 27th, 2003 at 02:10 AM
had to edit sumthin right quick....my comp messed up on me...its
all good............now the verse is complete....good luck...............1
read the edits hip hoppers... read the edits..! I said it somewhere in my verse..! DU DUD UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
He's been spotted adding lines people..!
AlieNation
..GrindHouse..
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how the hell am i 0-0?....its all good.....verses are in ladies..........
....and by the way......after Av seen my verse.....he corrected the
'important' in his sig......but he did mispell it.................
what are you talkin about..? Dammit Coolie..! Once again with the fake personals..!
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..GrindHouse..
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Okay Brandon...............Soon as u read it....u was like.....'oohh
shit.....let me fix that before anyone can read it'.....................
Yup, ......thats the way the cookie crumbles........
Im Breaking it 6 lines…….by 6…..Aight cos that was long shit
Avalon-
Ya brawlin..? Ya stupid... leave shots all in ya tunic
'Swhatcha get for tryna be a hero & havin the balls of a eunuch..!
13th... Av thought of ya style... our beef..? now you in my lime light,
this muthafucka bit the hand that feeds him... and every line that rhymed right...
your a Chyna dragon dude, your gay parade's the demonstration,
how all ya lines are all miss'es like when wife's on vacation...
Nice Flow Good Punches….I dint understand line 9 thou
I got this battle on lock... no one'll ride for a new guy with no pride,
if you think you MAY win... I got 11 more months on my side...ß-I liked that
yea I saw the RB tourney when I registered... and didn't bother,
cause when I saw the 64 man challenge... thought it was a search for his father...
watch me give you achin bones... from this no fakin moans,
and 13th can go off shakin... right now... like vibratin phones...
Well I Say The Flow Was Decent And The punches were Nice
look at his first personal... can't you see,
look closely it's the same one Mind Theory used to take the title from me... WHOA..!ßFuck GD!
Yea I lost to Evolve... that match I threw it... stop respondin,ß I liked That
but you're so wack... I'd win this... even if I rocket launched it..!
you're better for micro-wavs... the fuck you wanna do..!
^that's recycled heavily... but shit... come on 13th... it is only YOU..!<-Lmao Nice
Nice Punches Best so Far Nice Flow Good Creativty…..
don't regret ya life... ya poor... but cheer up 13th,
I mean... you are so much of a fruit... you're chocked full of vitamin C..!ß-LOL
this guys trash... I won't even waste my ammo on his defeat,
Av'll put a 'rifle through the garbage' like bums tryin to eat...
^that's word play... remember I taught you all that I could,
you got detention for a week... now ya opener's all that is good...
I liked The First Two Lines The Most Good Flow And Nice Wordplay
Cat holds no surprises... cuz damn he's wack... imagine that
Ya fuckin bag of tricks is barely the size of a sandwich sack...
ever notice... he'll say he'll do 16... wind up with 18... *GASP*
and he's seen on other sites... afterwords his lines are edited fast..?!
Coolie's been here for awhile... so of course he's old news,
look... still tryin to master the style he started... 1/1/02...
Ya think ya the king dick... but I think you a goober
And you're at least 11 fuckin inches short of bein' the ruler..!
Nice finsher That Was Really A Good…Verse And He Hit Hard And I He Put Some Personals in that 2……
His Verses Flowed Nice…….And His Punches Consistly Were Hiting My Favourite Verse Was:
look at his first personal... can't you see,
look closely it's the same one Mind Theory used to take the title from me... WHOA
Very Good Personal And Punchline……….Nice Flow 2…..
13 Discple……
u IM'd me said match 32,don't peep ur verse & try to lyrically top it
no need 2 feed i know ur steze & know ull prollyspit about rockets
or micro wav's....or defeat,or prolly sumthin that rhymes wit Coolie
but u stay gettin shoved & when u thought u was in love....u was
really suckin the dick of ur bully....
Me!..'member that?...point out the facts,bare in mind 3 weeks ago
bro....know why i see ur played punches commin....cuz u text slowß--Nice
Overal Decent Flow Some Good Punches….2 I think I spotted a Personal in line 5..
no personal hits in ur battles,thatswhy Evolve gave u the coldcock
again...i'll deliver the NOLAVA line...make u know ull neva be hot!.ß-Good!
stop!...give up the pen jots,at this point got more respect 4 knight
at least his punches has bite...this hemofeliac runs from his fights
^fact or fiction?..countless times checked in, then quickly ur ghost
fact or fiction?..then returned & recycled ALL ur punches the most
Personal On line 3 of dat I think and good flow and nice punch on line 2
ur talent ceased & deceased..hystorected followed wit dormant...
but u still think ur big,look at his sig,cat cant even spell importantßIts Spell Correctly…
irony is funny,once thought u was ill, now infected and plain sick...
if i need pleasure thats quick..i'll just open & listen 2 ur soundclick!
pointless attempts at makin sense,i mean look at his sacred script
32 left in the league? Tone-E missed ya cuz u ducked at the picks
Good flow Nice Personal(line 6) Multi’s!……Bad personal on line 2 of dat thou
somebody quick!..go to open mic & review the lines of his drop....
u'll notice that verse has similarities to the verse thats on top....
i'll give u some props...since ur a master at things thats played....
& after seein ur girl Kendra...yup....i'm convinced that ur gay!......
whadda ya say?...go 32, cuz i already got u beat at this part.....
call it a draw?...cuz beatin u i'm startin to master this art!..........
Nice Flow Nice punches I like those lines
like Napoleon Bonapart...ur little but ur head has gotten too big...
battle my son,both of yall play wit things other kids already did...
u wanted out of regime...wit no hate...i'll grant u those wishes....
u remind me of morbid...both write ghost & i cybered wit both of
yall bitches!.....ß---LOL DAMN!
first it was fun....second it was aiight...now beatin u is gettin old...
i'll make this one stick,do a newbie trick, & defeat u in bold
Nice Vocab and Wordplay Morbid Line Dope…..Nice Finsher 2
Best Line: u wanted out of regime...wit no hate...i'll grant u those wishes....
u remind me of morbid...both write ghost & i cybered wit both of
yall bitches!.....[
Il Say This Battle Had To Be Close……………Fucking Close!
Punches=Tie
Personals=Av
Flow=Both
Multis=13th discple
Creativty=Av
Wordplay=13th Discple
Overal……..TIE….But….There Has To Be a Winer And Im Going With Av Because I Really like His Personals And My Favourite line of This 1……
look at his first personal... can't you see,
look closely it's the same one Mind Theory used to take the title from me
Vote=Av………
This Battle Was Surely To Much for Me…..!
^nice break down kid....but seriously....the 'important' line....he
did misspell and changed it...but its all good.....good look...........1
Ok. . just to let you know. You can't edit a verse after your opponent has dropped. But I'll let you off with a warning. Just cuz I'm trying to get this league into top shape. But if it happens again you'll be DQ'd. Oh and I'll be back in a few to drop a vote.
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Word Perfect
aiight....word......but i was talkin to Av when i dropped this and
i had to correct sumthin right quick.....but i feel ya................ghost
sure ya did...
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..GrindHouse..
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Those Was Some Long Ass Verses
But Props To Ya Both
13th Disciple
Dawg You Didn't Come Hard Like You Usually Do
Must Of Been Havin A Bad Day Or Somethin
Nice Punches, Pretty Hard Multies
Avalon
Ya Shit Came Out Pretty Hard
Nice Punches And Creativity
:Break Down:
Punches=Tie
Flow=Tie
Multies=13th Disciple
Creativty=Avalon
Wordplay=Tie
Overall Vote=Avalon
He Came Juss A Lil Bit Harder
MAD RESPECT TO BOTH OF YOU
Last edited by Mortality; August 28th, 2003 at 06:26 AM
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