WK18: (1-2) DaveDILLY vs. (5-8) Exalted (Exalted Wins)

[Wuxia]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Exalted.
@daveDILLY

[daveDILLY]

here
good luck

[Exalted.]

Ok. Posting

[Exalted.]

dave pays for intimacy. women eat up his wallet & heart
in Dilapidated stripper w/ mileage use him til he's broke n falling apart

[daveDILLY]

if u collab or write with this loser - theres nothing good hes chalking..
in fact.......u'll find expenditure verse wrong - & the amount is shocking

[Slayerr.]

I think both word plays here were a bit of a reach, dilly’s was slightly cleaner for me but didn’t like the way he ended his punch which took a bit off it for me
V/ex

[Spree]

Ex’s wordplay went right over my head


Got Dave edging this though. Play was kind of a reach but it worked enough


V/Dave

[Wuxia]

Imo Exalted took this convincingly. There had to of been a better way to execute the wordplay, at least in my perspective, that would be something I had to deliberate on back and forth. But you know what. I loved the way he did it. It took me 2 attempts to get where I could fully grasp how he was delivering it. Dave's was equally complicated in how he executed it, to the point where after 5-6 times of me trying to making it sound the way he wanted it to, I gave in. I just felt that it wasn't necessarily a reach, just a really complicated wordplay to pull off, and Exalted didn't take that much effort to get where he was taking it.

v-Exalted

[Mac]

lol this was a hard read, because it took me a while to sort of understand both wps. In this case I got exalted with a better execution imo. Dave's was a good attempt but I prefered exs wording

[Fresh]

wasnt a fan of how either wordplay was utilized

after reading a few times i was able to kinda understand ex's easier, so for this reason he gets my vote

v/ Ex

[Wuxia]

4-1 needs votes