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@Aero
@Kill Spree
Last edited by Wuxia; October 3rd, 2023 at 05:57 AM
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Last edited by Aero; October 16th, 2023 at 01:20 PM
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Originally Posted by Aero
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Your wife swallowed 9 inches... In disbelief I asked
What word describes those slurp sounds as you slob my penis?
She said "That word's a MOUTHFUL...
Onomatopoeia"
& she was preg; I felt the baby kick & was instantly soft (ugh)
Years later I can still feel your daughter kicking, fending me off
Vets mention me often, classic verses I'm truly better
I've seen Spree with a sweet round, it had a chewy texture
I got Killers w/ bodies, pop ya house guest & hardly a mention
Hand 'em clips like "if you need more #'s, here's the party's extension"
Cant relate w/ middle-age white trash, quit talking your smack
If I ask how's the Economy I'm seated first class as you walk to the back
Last edited by Aero; October 14th, 2023 at 07:37 PM
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Originally Posted by Aero
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https://i.ibb.co/rM8qfCT/656-DB0-C5-...6-B4-A7-EF.png
They asked me…
“This a bump in the road”? Nah I jus shooo this bitch
Meanwhile Aero got rode, & BUMPS grew on his dick
Theres few that are sick & you is not it. you a faggot
If we hear “Aer Tight w/a body!?…Its My goons describing your casket
Hand in my waistband so the chamber + the chrome'll spin
& when my Palm Springs...you'll never see your vacation home again
with all his drinking at gay bars, i keep thinkin', damn is he okay?!
S’like the film...The Last Airbender resulted in some freaky fantasy role play
Forever a loser. been YEARS since he's had a laugh w/ friends
Wants to keep homies, butt-buddies get pissed off when he asks to be that with them
& she was preg; I felt the baby kick & was instantly soft (ugh)
Years later I can still feel your daughter kicking, fending me off
I got Killers w/ bodies, pop ya house guest & hardly a mention
Hand 'em clips like "if you need more #'s, here's the party's extension"
Cant relate w/ middle-age white trash, quit talking your smack
If I ask how's the Economy I'm seated first class as you walk to the back
“This a bump in the road”? Nah I jus shooo this bitch
Meanwhile Aero got rode, & BUMPS grew on his dick
Theres few that are sick & you is not it. you a faggot
If we hear “Aer Tight w/a body!?…Its My goons describing your casket
Hand in my waistband so the chamber + the chrome'll spin
& when my Palm Springs...you'll never see your vacation home again
Forever a loser. been YEARS since he's had a laugh w/ friends
Wants to keep homies, butt-buddies get pissed off when he asks to be that with them
This was a much better verse for Aero than last round. The setups helped me get into the punches more, and made each bar that much more enjoyable to read. It didn't feel like I was reading a keystyle, but rather an actual verse that was deliberated upon and written with some regard. The baby kick punch was funny because I think anybody who has slept with a pregnant woman can tell you how awkward it gets when that happens. Lmao. The Economy bar was dope and just felt real dickish to me. KS had a dope opener. Succinct in delivery. The Palm Springs bar was fire. Probably LOTB for me. Well, on his part. For Aero his LOTB was the baby kick punch. Turned out to be a pretty decent battle. I was into both verses.
v - Kill Spree
& she was preg; I felt the baby kick & was instantly soft (ugh)
Years later I can still feel your daughter kicking, fending me off
build up before the bar seemed like a waste but this was cool
Vets mention me often, classic verses I'm truly better
I've seen Spree with a sweet round, it had a chewy texture
gay
I got Killers w/ bodies, pop ya house guest & hardly a mention
Hand 'em clips like "if you need more #'s, here's the party's extension"
eh this was okay. Kind of a weak punch
Cant relate w/ middle-age white trash, quit talking your smack
If I ask how's the Economy I'm seated first class as you walk to the back
lol okay
Aero, not a bad showing here. I liked the daughter bar, and the last bar quite a bit. Everything else was jab or miss for me. I think if you work on consistency you could make finals next season.
Vs
“This a bump in the road”? Nah I jus shooo this bitch
Meanwhile Aero got rode, & BUMPS grew on his dick
I feel like you're capable of making this harsher
Theres few that are sick & you is not it. you a faggot
If we hear “Aer Tight w/a body!?…Its My goons describing your casket
much better. This is KS.
Hand in my waistband so the chamber + the chrome'll spin
& when my Palm Springs...you'll never see your vacation home again
dope
with all his drinking at gay bars, i keep thinkin', damn is he okay?!
S’like the film...The Last Airbender resulted in some freaky fantasy role play
meh
Forever a loser. been YEARS since he's had a laugh w/ friends
Wants to keep homies, butt-buddies get pissed off when he asks to be that with them
wording is weird
Kill, some dope haymakers in there and a couple misses. I feel like when you hit though you hit much harder than aero.
Overall a solid battle but kill spree brought jawbreakers while aero brought jabs. Vote ks
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Originally Posted by Wuxia
I got Killers w/ bodies, pop ya house guest & hardly a mention
Hand 'em clips like "if you need more #'s, here's the party's extension"
Cant relate w/ middle-age white trash, quit talking your smack
If I ask how's the Economy I'm seated first class as you walk to the back
vs
Theres few that are sick & you is not it. you a faggot
If we hear “Aer Tight w/a body!?…Its My goons describing your casket
Hand in my waistband so the chamber + the chrome'll spin
& when my Palm Springs...you'll never see your vacation home again
got 2v2 here and honestly I got spree with better misses. cuz wtf aero with the chewy stuff lol. The extension line was cool I actually wanted to pull it off but you did it better so props. economy line was a bit mild. Palm springs was dope, casket was cool
v spree
& she was preg; I felt the baby kick & was instantly soft (ugh)
Years later I can still feel your daughter kicking, fending me off
LOTB
Vets mention me often, classic verses I'm truly better
I've seen Spree with a sweet round, it had a chewy texture
This was just OK, kinda funny but not hard hitting
Cant relate w/ middle-age white trash, quit talking your smack
If I ask how's the Economy I'm seated first class as you walk to the back
Again, the wit is here, it's just not hard hitting.. light jab
vs
“This a bump in the road”? Nah I jus shooo this bitch
Meanwhile Aero got rode, & BUMPS grew on his dick
Could have been done better, but OK
Theres few that are sick & you is not it. you a faggot
If we hear “Aer Tight w/a body!?…Its My goons describing your casket
Not bad, at least it's mean
Hand in my waistband so the chamber + the chrome'll spin
& when my Palm Springs...you'll never see your vacation home again
Saw this coming but still original enough
Not as one-sided as it could have been. Both had their strengths and weak points.. Aero def had LOTB but the two other quotables were too light hearted to be effective insults, whereas Kill had that mean 'tone' to his verse.
v/Kill
Dude so ,
Aero the first bar was just all over the place lol , 2nd fending me off was fire , cool concept great flip . The spree sweet round/ chewy I feel like had dope potential , jit just completely fell flat , no power behind it . The party extension bar was ok and the economy first class flip was a bit weak , cool concept just didn’t pack the punch . Spree the bumps on your dick after reading the text thread , I thought was going to hit harder but it was ok . Aer tight was ok , Palm Springs was ok felt a bit forced , didn’t like the fantasy role play at all and the but buddies had potential, cool concept I just didn’t like the execution .
All in all I have it to kill , thought he just had the better verse overall. Both had some misses where the concept was there just didn’t execute it well. I thought after reading aero drop that kill would kind have rolled … but it ended up being closer than I thought
Vote spree better overall
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Aero
& she was preg; I felt the baby kick & was instantly soft (ugh)
Years later I can still feel your daughter kicking, fending me off
I got Killers w/ bodies, pop ya house guest & hardly a mention
Hand 'em clips like "if you need more #'s, here's the party's extension"
vs
KS
“This a bump in the road”? Nah I jus shooo this bitch
Meanwhile Aero got rode, & BUMPS grew on his dick
Theres few that are sick & you is not it. you a faggot
If we hear “Aer Tight w/a body!?…Its My goons describing your casket
Hand in my waistband so the chamber + the chrome'll spin
& when my Palm Springs...you'll never see your vacation home again
I enjoyed this battle. Aero has 0 conscious lol i love it. KS is viscous. I fill like KS dug a bit deeper and that first personal was funny af, and he never let up from there. neither really had misses IMO but KS just went harder
v/KS
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I got 60'ed by Spree. Mods close this immediately before I turn up.
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lmao Kill Spree Wins 6-0
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