Week 6 Contenders Match: Justice Grimm (3-2) vs Mimic (3-1) Justice Grimm WINS

[Fresh]

LLL Season 24

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

FAILURE TO VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

@Justice Grimm @Mimic

[Justice Grimm]

Checking in for the rematch. I’m going 16 for a contenders match.

[Mimic]

cool

[Mimic]

Bro..

all ya verses are disasters, no creativity proves u got worrying genes
kids got so much trash in ya locker his careers spiralled into every cliché bullying scene
couple hundred & my goons there.. for that dollar I'll gore the rat
think this runnin from home? nah.. I just got the stick over ya shoulder for that bag
Hands around his throat to finish him, not a single friend be missing him
Gerard Butler. I'm taking Justice in my own hands quicker than Law Abiding Citizen
Can't get under my skin, I see straight past ur autism & u aint hard as ya thought
last time dude struck a chord? ..was in a disabled restroom signalling for extra support
& I rate all my bitches, I'd never settle for hoes less than solid 9's
so if u get a broad w/ a figure of 8.. s'cuz u've been rejected an infinite amount of times
This back & forth won't do u favours bro, a Champ match we aint sharing,
fuck the Cat & Mouse games.. ya head'll get taken off on cam like the Tom & Jerry parent
this probs means everything to u, lose this he'd need to session a doctor
emotional bitch'll need to vent so much he'd get voted out for being the Imposter
so fuck u & ya raging whore, bet that gaping hole is messy
when her face is on so much wood she gets mistaken for Plank in Ed Edd 'n' Eddy


16.

[Justice Grimm]

Revenge isn’t talk. When Mim saw me I bet it came as a shock
I brought heat for the runback - just not the cardio to chase him all the way down the block
You got NOTHING, so watch from the stands when I curse
A battle w/ me’s a lotB, so sit down n help the voters pick one out of my verse
Think you a fighter? You a fake. Skate off ya rep but bout to fall to a GOAT
You DREAM of this smoke - since that n mirrors account for most of ya votes
J brings the kinda heat witch not every fellow discern
Raise the stakes n a Salem w/ fire… Really give him a hell of a burn
Me wordy? I prove ya wrong n kick your idiot ass
School you w/bars short as the busses that take you to class
Ya lines are tasteless, stretched concepts ought to carry some shame
J got Delta win… locked it down, masked n vaxxed it w/ how ya variants strain
N on the topic ya girl filthy, crack whore vibes n it’s gross that you smooch her
Sucked me off for the gram… N gave her an extra one too if she stay the fuck away in the future
My gloves got brass, plaster n steel. Teeth fly til the fans need protection
This candy Brit’ll break for show… turn this battle into Granny’s Confections

[mal diction]

all ya verses are disasters, no creativity proves u got worrying genes
kids got so much trash in ya locker his careers spiralled into every cliché bullying scene
what
couple hundred & my goons there.. for that dollar I'll gore the rat
think this runnin from home? nah.. I just got the stick over ya shoulder for that bag
is this a UK joke?
Hands around his throat to finish him, not a single friend be missing him
Gerard Butler. I'm taking Justice in my own hands quicker than Law Abiding Citizen
not bad
Can't get under my skin, I see straight past ur autism & u aint hard as ya thought
last time dude struck a chord? ..was in a disabled restroom signalling for extra support
not bad lol... could have worded it a little better though
& I rate all my bitches, I'd never settle for hoes less than solid 9's
so if u get a broad w/ a figure of 8.. s'cuz u've been rejected an infinite amount of times
this is worded all wrong.. see what the attempt was though
This back & forth won't do u favours bro, a Champ match we aint sharing,
fuck the Cat & Mouse games.. ya head'll get taken off on cam like the Tom & Jerry parent
dont get it
this probs means everything to u, lose this he'd need to session a doctor
emotional bitch'll need to vent so much he'd get voted out for being the Imposter
not feeling this
so fuck u & ya raging whore, bet that gaping hole is messy
when her face is on so much wood she gets mistaken for Plank in Ed Edd 'n' Eddy
iight



Revenge isn’t talk. When Mim saw me I bet it came as a shock
I brought heat for the runback - just not the cardio to chase him all the way down the block
what
You got NOTHING, so watch from the stands when I curse
A battle w/ me’s a lotB, so sit down n help the voters pick one out of my verse
no
Think you a fighter? You a fake. Skate off ya rep but bout to fall to a GOAT
You DREAM of this smoke - since that n mirrors account for most of ya votes
iight
J brings the kinda heat witch not every fellow discern
Raise the stakes n a Salem w/ fire… Really give him a hell of a burn
no... not feeling this one
Me wordy? I prove ya wrong n kick your idiot ass
School you w/bars short as the busses that take you to class
was okay... i feel like i'm starting to lower my standards ...
Ya lines are tasteless, stretched concepts ought to carry some shame
J got Delta win… locked it down, masked n vaxxed it w/ how ya variants strain
iight
N on the topic ya girl filthy, crack whore vibes n it’s gross that you smooch her
Sucked me off for the gram… N gave her an extra one too if she stay the fuck away in the future
nope
My gloves got brass, plaster n steel. Teeth fly til the fans need protection
This candy Brit’ll break for show… turn this battle into Granny’s Confections
okay


i want to vote tie.. Grimm came with a subtlely hard verse .. some of Mimic's lines had potential but not potent enough for the win in my eyes.. so vote Grimm

[Mimic]

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[Slayerr.]

Can't get under my skin, I see straight past ur autism & u aint hard as ya thought
last time dude struck a chord? ..was in a disabled restroom signalling for extra support
& I rate all my bitches, I'd never settle for hoes less than solid 9's
so if u get a broad w/ a figure of 8.. s'cuz u've been rejected an infinite amount of times

Vs

You got NOTHING, so watch from the stands when I curse
A battle w/ me’s a lotB, so sit down n help the voters pick one out of my verse
Me wordy? I prove ya wrong n kick your idiot ass
School you w/bars short as the busses that take you to class

Pretty even battle here both had some really nice concepts but killed the execution. Both had two nice bars then lots of misses due to wording. I liked grims gram line and that would be sick in audio but not quite text good. I think grim had the slightly more entertaining verse throughout so just pips it for me

V/grim

[Fresh]

all ya verses are disasters, no creativity proves u got worrying genes
kids got so much trash in ya locker his careers spiralled into every cliché bullying scene
decent
couple hundred & my goons there.. for that dollar I'll gore the rat
think this runnin from home? nah.. I just got the stick over ya shoulder for that bag
not feeling this
Hands around his throat to finish him, not a single friend be missing him
Gerard Butler. I'm taking Justice in my own hands quicker than Law Abiding Citizen
decent
Can't get under my skin, I see straight past ur autism & u aint hard as ya thought
last time dude struck a chord? ..was in a disabled restroom signalling for extra support
nah
& I rate all my bitches, I'd never settle for hoes less than solid 9's
so if u get a broad w/ a figure of 8.. s'cuz u've been rejected an infinite amount of times
lol cool
This back & forth won't do u favours bro, a Champ match we aint sharing,
fuck the Cat & Mouse games.. ya head'll get taken off on cam like the Tom & Jerry parent
cool
this probs means everything to u, lose this he'd need to session a doctor
emotional bitch'll need to vent so much he'd get voted out for being the Imposter
not feelin this
so fuck u & ya raging whore, bet that gaping hole is messy
when her face is on so much wood she gets mistaken for Plank in Ed Edd 'n' Eddy
not a fan

vs

Revenge isn’t talk. When Mim saw me I bet it came as a shock
I brought heat for the runback - just not the cardio to chase him all the way down the block
not feeling this
You got NOTHING, so watch from the stands when I curse
A battle w/ me’s a lotB, so sit down n help the voters pick one out of my verse
nah
Think you a fighter? You a fake. Skate off ya rep but bout to fall to a GOAT
You DREAM of this smoke - since that n mirrors account for most of ya votes
pretty cool
J brings the kinda heat witch not every fellow discern
Raise the stakes n a Salem w/ fire… Really give him a hell of a burn
diggin it
Me wordy? I prove ya wrong n kick your idiot ass
School you w/bars short as the busses that take you to class
lol cool
Ya lines are tasteless, stretched concepts ought to carry some shame
J got Delta win… locked it down, masked n vaxxed it w/ how ya variants strain
wording hurt it imo
N on the topic ya girl filthy, crack whore vibes n it’s gross that you smooch her
Sucked me off for the gram… N gave her an extra one too if she stay the fuck away in the future
lol decent
My gloves got brass, plaster n steel. Teeth fly til the fans need protection
This candy Brit’ll break for show… turn this battle into Granny’s Confections
cool

pretty close but i've got JG edging this one out

v/ JG

[Phalanx]

Bro..

all ya verses are disasters, no creativity proves u got worrying genes
kids got so much trash in ya locker his careers spiralled into every cliché bullying scene
Light jab.
couple hundred & my goons there.. for that dollar I'll gore the rat
think this runnin from home? nah.. I just got the stick over ya shoulder for that bag
Decent jab.
Hands around his throat to finish him, not a single friend be missing him
Gerard Butler. I'm taking Justice in my own hands quicker than Law Abiding Citizen
Pretty solid.
Can't get under my skin, I see straight past ur autism & u aint hard as ya thought
last time dude struck a chord? ..was in a disabled restroom signalling for extra support
This didnt do it for me.
& I rate all my bitches, I'd never settle for hoes less than solid 9's
so if u get a broad w/ a figure of 8.. s'cuz u've been rejected an infinite amount of times
This wasnt bad
This back & forth won't do u favours bro, a Champ match we aint sharing,
fuck the Cat & Mouse games.. ya head'll get taken off on cam like the Tom & Jerry parent
I fucks w/ this.
this probs means everything to u, lose this he'd need to session a doctor
emotional bitch'll need to vent so much he'd get voted out for being the Imposter
Decent jab
so fuck u & ya raging whore, bet that gaping hole is messy
when her face is on so much wood she gets mistaken for Plank in Ed Edd 'n' Eddy
Ehhh...Not big on this.


16.

Revenge isn’t talk. When Mim saw me I bet it came as a shock
I brought heat for the runback - just not the cardio to chase him all the way down the block
Not feeling this.
You got NOTHING, so watch from the stands when I curse
A battle w/ me’s a lotB, so sit down n help the voters pick one out of my verse
Cool.
Think you a fighter? You a fake. Skate off ya rep but bout to fall to a GOAT
You DREAM of this smoke - since that n mirrors account for most of ya votes
Decent jab.
J brings the kinda heat witch not every fellow discern
Raise the stakes n a Salem w/ fire… Really give him a hell of a burn
Solid stuff.
Me wordy? I prove ya wrong n kick your idiot ass
School you w/bars short as the busses that take you to class
Super light..
Ya lines are tasteless, stretched concepts ought to carry some shame
J got Delta win… locked it down, masked n vaxxed it w/ how ya variants strain
Not big on this.
N on the topic ya girl filthy, crack whore vibes n it’s gross that you smooch her
Sucked me off for the gram… N gave her an extra one too if she stay the fuck away in the future
This was funny
My gloves got brass, plaster n steel. Teeth fly til the fans need protection
This candy Brit’ll break for show… turn this battle into Granny’s Confections
Decent jab.

This was close. Some dope shit from both, but I personally got to edge it to Mimic.

[Cody Nash]

all ya verses are disasters, no creativity proves u got worrying genes
kids got so much trash in ya locker his careers spiralled into every cliché bullying scene
aight
couple hundred & my goons there.. for that dollar I'll gore the rat
think this runnin from home? nah.. I just got the stick over ya shoulder for that bag
ehh wasn't feelin' that
Hands around his throat to finish him, not a single friend be missing him
Gerard Butler. I'm taking Justice in my own hands quicker than Law Abiding Citizen
throwback movie punch here haha
Can't get under my skin, I see straight past ur autism & u aint hard as ya thought
last time dude struck a chord? ..was in a disabled restroom signalling for extra support
eh miss for me
& I rate all my bitches, I'd never settle for hoes less than solid 9's
so if u get a broad w/ a figure of 8.. s'cuz u've been rejected an infinite amount of times
aight lol infinity punch
This back & forth won't do u favours bro, a Champ match we aint sharing,
fuck the Cat & Mouse games.. ya head'll get taken off on cam like the Tom & Jerry parent
aight
this probs means everything to u, lose this he'd need to session a doctor
emotional bitch'll need to vent so much he'd get voted out for being the Imposter
that's coo
so fuck u & ya raging whore, bet that gaping hole is messy
when her face is on so much wood she gets mistaken for Plank in Ed Edd 'n' Eddy
I feel like this coulda been sooo much harder worded just a little better

vs

Revenge isn’t talk. When Mim saw me I bet it came as a shock
I brought heat for the runback - just not the cardio to chase him all the way down the block
felt wordy, coulda been sharper
You got NOTHING, so watch from the stands when I curse
A battle w/ me’s a lotB, so sit down n help the voters pick one out of my verse
aight, not direct imo but smooth
Think you a fighter? You a fake. Skate off ya rep but bout to fall to a GOAT
You DREAM of this smoke - since that n mirrors account for most of ya votes
I liked that
J brings the kinda heat witch not every fellow discern
Raise the stakes n a Salem w/ fire… Really give him a hell of a burn
not sure I like the wording here
Me wordy? I prove ya wrong n kick your idiot ass
School you w/bars short as the busses that take you to class
lol, just called you wordy up above so I felt like you was comin' at me... lmao, nah but this was ok, felt light
Ya lines are tasteless, stretched concepts ought to carry some shame
J got Delta win… locked it down, masked n vaxxed it w/ how ya variants strain
"delta win" coulda been so hard! but felt like it fell flag in the 2nd half of the punchline
N on the topic ya girl filthy, crack whore vibes n it’s gross that you smooch her
Sucked me off for the gram… N gave her an extra one too if she stay the fuck away in the future
lol
My gloves got brass, plaster n steel. Teeth fly til the fans need protection
This candy Brit’ll break for show… turn this battle into Granny’s Confections
ehh, wasn't into that

Could definitely go either way but I was feelin' Mimic just a slight bit more by a haiiiiir.

vote Mimic

[Fresh]

hate calling it so close but its gotta move on.

3-2 Justice Grimm wins