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Voting ends on Sunday
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@King Dee Bee
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@King Dee Bee
Last edited by Phalanx; January 16th, 2022 at 07:15 PM
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3 Kingz Cartel....2 time B-R-V Text Rap Heavyweight champ
@King Dee Bee Bars due tonight.
My Georgia font says ur wording stinks Phalanx, it ain't great know why?/
Ya execution's such a load of Bull Dog!,..the state of Alabama hates your lines/
3 Kingz Cartel....2 time B-R-V Text Rap Heavyweight champ
You're in perilous waters! Send shell's to ya chest so prepare for the slaughter
After what the barrel'll offer? You'll see King swim w/ the fishes like Ariel's father
I did like the whole Alabama bulldog concept I just felt the wordplay didn’t have much sting factor for me. Phal had a cool nameplay along with the metaphorical comparison that connected better.
V/Phal
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I liked king bd's lateral word play, but but the overall bar was light imo
Phalanx was nice here.
Vote phlax
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oh hell nah my shit all fucked up. Hol up
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King bd shit was creative I'm not gonna lie. But that load of bull flip was kinda corny.
Phalanx was still nicer.
Still vote phlax
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
fuckk wasnt feeling the state of alabama part.. wasnt executed correctly IMO.. phalanx was pretty creative here.. I really liked it. V/phalanx
Vote Phalanx ... overall better pun ... KDB could have flipped that a little better... simply put KDB didnt do it for me
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KDB bar was a little.. too straight forward? not really much going on as far as hard impacts but the concept was deffo there. Phalanx I felt had the better bar by a clear margin.
V/Phalanx
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
King - a decent enough punch but nothing too creative or clever about it and in this level of match I think you need to do slightly more
Phalanx - concept was alright, but the wording was perfect delivered maximum impact
V/phalanx
phal had a clean punch. read smooth. king dee bee had a decent punch but not enough to top phalanx
v/ phal
lol that cartoon bar was on point though.. just the harder punchline here for sure
Vote Phalanx
Phalanx wins 8-0.
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