Week 9: Fresh (1-7) vs. Kuhn (0-2) - Fresh wins

[Zunto]

Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.


@Fresh @Kuhn

[Fresh]

Check

[Fresh]

u live an awful life. your to do list just keeps getting deeper, sadly
so hows ur plate always full but u dont have the means to feed ya family

[Kuhn]

I've gone easy for 2 weeks but you aint challengin shit
A little heat will ruin fresh you lil talentless bitch

[Phalanx]

Vote - Fresh

Kuhn's concept isn5 bad, but the execution is too stripped down & simple. Fell flat as a result. Fresh had a light jab, but I'm digging the layered wording.

[plethora]

Kuhns bar has potential but wording issues


V- fresh

[Slayerr.]

Fresh - cool turn of phrase, not the hardest hitting punch but the wording was clean and executed nicely

Kuhn - I feel like the wording in the punchline was a little lazy compared to the set up and after the set up I was expecting something that hit hard but it just didn’t come. Concept was there though

V/ fresh

[Cody Nash]

ugh yeah I gotta give this to Fresh lmao.. Kuhn's felt like it wasn't complex ENOUGH

heat ruining something fresh has potential but coulda cut deeper with some polish

vote Fresh

[Joe Boston]

I didn’t like freshs setup but the finish was a pretty good flip and creative. Kuhns was direct but felt it had no sting.

V/ fresh

[Spree]

Fresh wins