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    Black Cosmic War

    Black cosmic war; black conquest war; black conquest war with conquest sin
    The embodiment of light and death; the plight of breaths; the eyes of red
    I am the sentimental sentimentalist; the sinful sentiment of a arch angel
    Carve fables on broad tables; the horsemen's horsemen's finger with a broad sword
    Hold the rope of time and space; rhyme is grace; shine with grace
    I am the opulent warlord with a broad sword; hold the hands of a angel
    I am a angel of light; the angel of sin; the angel of white swords and burning swords
    I the angel of white swords and burning swords; hold burning swords with burning force
    I am a white angel from Heaven's Gates; holding the hands of Lucifer and God
    I shed tears of joy; when Lucifer was sent to Hell; with anguish and sin
    I am the sinful sentiment of sinful plagues; the wise Owl of a water storm
    I inhaled the sin of many people; than cometh' light with the steeple cathedral....

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    Re: Black Cosmic War

    I understood this one a little bit more... I like your style of poetry - it makes you think
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    Re: Black Cosmic War

    Some people religion motivates them, I found that the more I leave that stuff out the better I write , it's ok to add a few mentions into a rhyme but this was a little confusing to me, more poetic I guess than a rhyme It caught my eye with the title but wasn't what I expected I guess

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