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    Hero's Dilemma

    This must be the hero’s dilemma Superman never spoke about……

    Nightly conversations elicit scars that bled from your statements
    Insane twists, like every card in the air makes white lines on the pavement:
    Your Bible fell to a faceless monster residing in the breath of Satan
    Your cries for help made me ponder what exactly the “S” on this cape is….

    Standing embracing a situation placed in the grim face of shock value
    The messenger told of a distant soul that addiction had bound to
    Saw chain-to-ankle fusion, distraught by your shackling bruises
    Yet talk of white nooses was liked to be thought of as therapeutic
    Standing alone was an emotional scar mixed with a demon’s kiss
    A fiend for lips broken into a globe born on the sword’s secret tip
    A preference rests for a pen to fulfill my insanity’s spoken needs
    Then unknowingly as I listen I witness your emotions slowly bleed
    Sewing me in disbelief, but still held the light of your prism pleas
    That only the blind man sees, maybe he’s best to guide you visually
    Through a jaded path of darkness staying illuminated by a white gold
    That ignites souls who never see what the sake of staying alive holds

    Now an entire question is left balanced on the band of friendship
    Sands of tension reveal a powdered malice hands have bled in
    A candid mention: “Don’t tell anyone, please help me come back”
    How does any Superman respond to something like that?
    Now an entire question is left balanced on the band of friendship
    Sands of tension reveal a powdered malice hands have bled in
    A candid mention: “Don’t tell anyone, please help me come back”
    How does any Superman respond to something like that?

    This must be the hero’s dilemma Superman never spoke about……


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...11#post2037711
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    Oh wow...this shit left me speechless...right after the first four lines...this piece was superb in intellect...imagery...an word placement...this was an excellent topic as well...i mean this had my mind buggin...im glad to see you come back...its been a while since i had seen anything from you...but this speak seemed to speak to me...this piece was excellent...its funny ive been back for like a day...read a whole lotta shit an this blew them out of the water...dope shit man...much respect...THUGGA POINTS 4 LIFE...peace...

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    Hey, I haven't read anything of yours like they have ^^but i'm really feeling what you wrote. Your topic is great. this left me speechless and there's nothing i could change. YOu did a very very good job keep it up

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    This was hot, the structure the flow the vocab was all good.
    The first two lines just drawed me in and you kept holding the attention with ya imagery this was really dope.

    Return the favour.
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    Thanks for the input.

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    Shit. Amazing. Made My Day.
    That's basically all I have to say.
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    Re: Hero's Dilemma

    Hero Dilemma is a thread here that must be a superman that never spoke about the ways in the great climate. This is about the Bible as a book that can be needed in a good and creative way of making the easy-essay.org review for ponder the exactly a same way as well.

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    Re: Hero's Dilemma

    Is that Pac? LoL
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