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  • Mofo

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Thread: Ronin vs MoFo - (4-2 MOFO)

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    Ronin vs MoFo - (4-2 MOFO)

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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo

    I dont wanna waste good lines or be too clever...
    When this dudes MO is having the worse name ever.
    Ur writing suggest u suck at life, sitting on the couch staying soft...
    Ppl telling em modem cables ain't gonna work if u don't pay the cost.
    history repeats itself, loss after loss cuz u lame n stupid wack...
    He's used to that, the future says youll never be good at txt Oracle dude in chat.
    Enough of this, its obv I'm way above this kid...
    Mess with em at ur own risk, Motel it quick...like when I fuck his bitch.
    U wack af, no need being too drastically rude...
    Nobody thinks Focal, if he's the center of attention its cause we laughing at dude.

    10...

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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo

    I get it cracking like I phone screens on concrete I’m that dude/
    Rejection letter, loan denying emails, death messages. Honky I’m bad news//
    Yo ass a free turkey giveaway. Long line of homo mating hobos waiting /
    To pump Ronins booty till it’s diarrhea shitty, bloody and gapeing//
    Can’t protect your family, everyone knows you a disgrace\
    I Push down your child’s mother n piss in your newborns face//
    Society’s worse,government assisted, you on welfare stuck/
    I’ll rob you for your food stamps n sell em 50 cents on a buck//
    Let’s talk depth charts, how you 6th man on your wife’s team/
    Tuna booty sand which mouth, sucking out her anal beads. The 5th string//
    deep booty bitch









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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo

    @Bash @slecht @Ryno @Blue Bayou @King @miracle @Networth @GrimmReaperZ @Kill Spree @Diasick

    Let's get some votes so I can move onto someone better
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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo

    I dont wanna waste good lines or be too clever...
    When this dudes MO is having the worse name ever.
    Very basic punch with a very basic rhyme.
    Ur writing suggest u suck at life, sitting on the couch staying soft...
    Ppl telling em modem cables ain't gonna work if u don't pay the cost.
    Don't really rhyme, close but no cigar. Maybe that was a punch.
    history repeats itself, loss after loss cuz u lame n stupid wack...
    He's used to that, the future says youll never be good at txt Oracle dude in chat.
    Little better rhyme with some syllable compounding but another weak punch.
    Enough of this, its obv I'm way above this kid...
    Mess with em at ur own risk, Motel it quick...like when I fuck his bitch.
    Another very basic rhyme and weak punch.
    U wack af, no need being too drastically rude...
    Nobody thinks Focal, if he's the center of attention its cause we laughing at dude.
    Mediocre finish, mediocre rhyme.


    I get it cracking like I phone screens on concrete I’m that dude/
    Rejection letter, loan denying emails, death messages. Honky I’m bad news//
    Basic rhyme with decent metaphor/wordplay.
    Yo ass a free turkey giveaway. Long line of homo mating hobos waiting /
    To pump Ronins booty till it’s diarrhea shitty, bloody and gapeing//
    Decent rhymes cheme, weak punchline.
    Can’t protect your family, everyone knows you a disgrace\
    I Push down your child’s mother n piss in your newborns face//
    First hard hit all battle.
    Society’s worse,government assisted, you on welfare stuck/
    I’ll rob you for your food stamps n sell em 50 cents on a buck//
    That's pretty funny. Not a bad punchline.
    Let’s talk depth charts, how you 6th man on your wife’s team/
    Tuna booty sand which mouth, sucking out her anal beads. The 5th string//
    deep booty bitch
    Personal but not very well put together. Not a strong finish.


    Very weak battle. MoFo had a little wordplay and better punches. Ronin, I don't know how you are critical of others with that elementary flow. It's just border line dillusional. Almost no multi's or compounding syllables, barley rhymes with a out of wack flow. Wordplay/punches weak and corny.

    Vote: MoFo

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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo

    Bruhh this mf @Jutebox has NO clue what a text battle looks like and I'd scorch him in that AND Audio at anytime smmfh on gawd tho you need to gtfo bro especially citing multis and compound syllables as a winner here! Learn where you are, and adjust ,,or audio battle me so i can prove that you'll sound dumb with all that and no "punchlines/metaphors ..wordplays etc..please try and pull that Eminem from the SlimShady LP compound syllable shit rhyming a bunch of shit but not saying nothing shit wit me in audio and ima straight flame yo unknowledgeable ass! Stop voting if you gonna pick verse 2 over 1 here, cause it only goes to prove you're not ready for 'text' here @Jutebox .. but we do have an 'audio' section and I'd be glad to see you in that ring as well frfr so hit me up asap u fuckin scrub.


    I dont wanna waste good lines or be too clever...
    When this dudes MO is having the worse name ever.
    ^light punch, poor setup
    Ur writing suggest u suck at life, sitting on the couch staying soft...
    Ppl telling em modem cables ain't gonna work if u don't pay the cost.
    ^decent wp culda be setup better
    history repeats itself, loss after loss cuz u lame n stupid wack...
    He's used to that, the future says youll never be good at txt Oracle dude in chat.
    ^subpar setup, cool, tho oldish wordplay
    Enough of this, its obv I'm way above this kid...
    Mess with em at ur own risk, Motel it quick...like when I fuck his bitch.
    ^not well setup and this NP/wordplay was very random, not a great bar
    U wack af, no need being too drastically rude...
    Nobody thinks Focal, if he's the center of attention its cause we laughing at dude.
    ^decent wp and finish


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    I get it cracking like I phone screens on concrete I’m that dude/
    Rejection letter, loan denying emails, death messages. Honky I’m bad news//
    ^no setup , no punch
    Yo ass a free turkey giveaway. Long line of homo mating hobos waiting /
    To pump Ronins booty till it’s diarrhea shitty, bloody and gapeing//
    ^decent setup, no punch
    Can’t protect your family, everyone knows you a disgrace\
    I Push down your child’s mother n piss in your newborns face//
    ^Harsh punch from a good setup. Best bar
    Society’s worse,government assisted, you on welfare stuck/
    I’ll rob you for your food stamps n sell em 50 cents on a buck//
    ^decent setup, light light punch
    Let’s talk depth charts, how you 6th man on your wife’s team/
    Tuna booty sand which mouth, sucking out her anal beads. The 5th string//
    ^cool setup, poor punch thats poorly worded

    So yea what we have here is slightly more complexity in bars versus more comedy in delivery.. slightly More structure verses a slightly more loose rhyme scheme. Wordplay vs just Rhyming. More hits vs less hits and thats what wins in text flat out. Mofo's verse may have flowed better with more connected words, but there are any number of people who can rap and make it sound funny and witty to "rookie" readers/listeners because they're mostly looking to be entertained without having to think much.. and while I disagree with one of those rookies votes.. @Jutebox and I do agree that this battle was rather uninspiring on both sides with neither doing anything extraordinary with verses that mostly felt to be just there or just enough to be considered a decent verse. A. Diction didn't drop sooo much better than his opponent that its a clear win but with just the one or two better formulated bars from setup to punch that make for a more thought provoking read he does just barely enough to take this.. An easy thing to miss when you don't do this shit and therefore don't understand just yet. Jutebox.. keep your eyes on lyrics from now on foo.. cause those beat swag HERE, all day.

    V/ A. Diction by a verry slight margin, no disrespect to Mofo or the beast who is SlimShady


    I get it cracking like I phone screens on concrete I’m that dude/
    Rejection letter, loan denying emails, death messages. Honky I’m bad news//


    ^^ALSO.. I originally said this wasn't a punch.. it was... still not the best setup but it connects, so with that..

    This battle is a TIE... Im sorry.. but im voting Diction because it deserves to be a tie,, not a MOFO win, and thats as honest an fair a vote as is possible.
    @Jutebox come back and poll your vote for MoFo you fkn rookie.. and get it together, That means go to the top of this page and click on his name. This is at best a drawn battle,
    Last edited by Networth; October 10th, 2019 at 01:24 PM

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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo

    @Jutebox @MoFo @ a. Diction @Networth

    Y’all stop swaying/freeposting in battles. Not so much you net but just including you before you respond.

    If there’s an issue tag a mod/admin. If y’all keep doing this we’ll be forced to put you kids in time out
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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    @Jutebox @MoFo @ a. Diction @Networth

    Y’all stop swaying/freeposting in battles. Not so much you net but just including you before you respond.

    If there’s an issue tag a mod/admin. If y’all keep doing this we’ll be forced to put you kids in time out
    Thanks
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    Quit modding start voting
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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo

    Quote Originally Posted by A. Diction View Post
    Quit modding start voting
    Nice final warning or you can get banned

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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo - Open For Votes

    Best Lines:
    Rejection letter, loan denying emails, death messages. Honky I’m bad news
    -chose this line specifically for creativity
    vs.
    Ppl telling em modem cables ain't gonna work if u don't pay the cost.
    -chose this line because as an online gamer this is classic burn.
    Overall both did not stand out. A.diction's flow seemed effortless because it doesn't show much effort. MOFO used colorful language and like most battle raps included gay jokes and girlfriend/wife/mom jokes that are frankly overdone which I don't give points for unless it completely stands out. Because of the overall luke warm vs. just below luke warm performances of both...…..VOTE: A.diction

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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo - Open For Votes

    Let me know if I need to do a breakdown.

    There wasn't a whole lot to be proud of in this battle to be honest..

    It looks like Ronin was expecting MoFo to suck and for the most part he did; however, MoFo did have one line that hit and I liked a little:

    "Can't protect your family, everyone knows you a disgrace
    I push down your child's mother n piss in your newborn's face"

    Oh... and the 50 cent line was cool too..

    I'm not saying it was the greatest but it was the best in this subpar battle. Based on that, MoFo's wack ass gets the vote.

    Vote - MoFo

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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo - Open For Votes

    Vote: MoFo

    Both had decent flow, MoFo came harder on the punches but I think both did a good job which I haven't seen much of myself.

    MoFo Society’s worse,government assisted, you on welfare stuck/
    I’ll rob you for your food stamps n sell em 50 cents on a buck//

    Networth Enough of this, its obv I'm way above this kid...
    Mess with em at ur own risk, Motel it quick...like when I fuck his bitch.

    history repeats itself, loss after loss cuz u lame n stupid wack...
    He's used to that, the future says youll never be good at txt Oracle dude in chat.

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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo - (4-2 MOFO)

    do agree that this battle was rather uninspiring on both sides with neither doing anything extraordinary with verses that mostly felt to be just there or just enough to be considered a decent verse.

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    Quote Originally Posted by airfoxeight View Post
    do agree that this battle was rather uninspiring on both sides with neither doing anything extraordinary with verses that mostly felt to be just there or just enough to be considered a decent verse.
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    A. Diction didn't drop sooo much better than his opponent that its a clear win but with just the one or two better formulated bars from setup to punch that make for a more thought provoking read he does just barely enough to take this.

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    Re: Ronin vs MoFo - (4-2 MOFO)

    Quote Originally Posted by airfoxeight View Post
    do agree that this battle was rather uninspiring on both sides with neither doing anything extraordinary with verses that mostly felt to be just there or just enough to be considered a decent verse.

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    nox player for pc jiofi.local.html

    A. Diction didn't drop sooo much better than his opponent that its a clear win but with just the one or two better formulated bars from setup to punch that make for a more thought provoking read he does just barely enough to take this.
    Both had decent flow, MoFo came harder on the punches but I think both did a good job which I haven't seen much of myself

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