Semi-Finals : Amen vs Greedy (Greedy Wins)

[ILLunatic]

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Season 18 Playoffs

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Semi-Finals & Finals: 16-20

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[Amen]

Yerp.

[Greedy]

jacking my flows, Nigga au contraire
I was selling blow since 12 yrs old, my dear
bust the calico to let em know I'm here
choppas in the trunk of ever auto I steer

[Greedy]

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yeah I lifted weights cuz fuck I didn't wanna be all skinny n shit I was at like 165.

Yea, 165 was my weight as well.

I haven't, but did try the green-label Rebel IPA. Tasty and great with steak

Yea, funny you mention that. Tried it at a steak house over the weekend.

going to see Fast 7, bro

Got my tickets a few days ago..

Tarnished ass gold go clean that fucking shit

Lmao @ not knowing what rose gold is.

I use to have tht some Jesus head piece backkkkkkkkkkkk in the day.

all you do is 1up shit like a faggit, n run ya mouth here
niggas said theres life on Mars, n u bragged about ur weed connect and summer house there
This pathological lying shit is getting bad.... u need serious help, b
u stitched enuf fabrications to make the next outfit u wear in a selfie
No one'll validate u. Fag we hate u and mean this shit, Queen
lol at needing a sure rinse, when you been washed up since season 16

@Obnoxious let's write a verse for your opponent, I got some concepts

ur death'll be short, u should accept the support of ya peers n it's clear
Aer' supplyin ur lines woulda breathed life into that corpse you swears a career
ill slay this bum and every alias he has when i spray this gun
It'll only take one bullet to nick Name for D.O.A to be his latest one
wk14 I put my foot in ya ass, u just blamed it on the reefer and clowned a bit
Idgaf if you was Hymen..but I really need my left sneaker from out of it.
I won't question the times u talked shit cause a full clip is the answer
you dug this grave..I'll just throw dirt on ya, Name and you'll wish it was slander
Bein better at text than sex is why ur wife is in bed w/a goon
Your deceased to amaze her, and killed the relationship instead of the poon
ya bitch about yo kick you out, cuz you been on this site forever
But u can sleep in ur talents room for improvement until you get your life together

[Amen]

Allen Knight vs Barcotic LLL Champ Match Week 13
im doin drive-bys on ur crew, this semi is all game
leave u & ur fuckin Pallet up when i dump something heavy in ya'll frames

Greedy's feed in his vote on Allen's Bar
NICE SHIT RIGHT HERE

Greedy vs Joe Boston LLL Playoffs Rnd# 1
U lame clown, we from the same town but u aint respected in the valley of bosses
If I'm EVER being a pallets to suggest you that u use some to carry ya losses

Listen...

This beatin'll be ruthless, a couple jabs, haymakers & after dawg I'ma slam ya,
Then have a doctor feeding youtubes, which he'd avoid at all cost; just to stay off of a camera.
Scared bitch, too shook to expose ya features? Which's why we label ya weaker,
The voters much rather epic battle, but this corny faggot isn't capable of producing either.
Greedy don't want to shoot the 5 cuz Amen'll easily check you with fist kid,
RB'll witness a single Shot Put this retard in line for a gold medal at the special Olympics.
Pallet's no coincidence BITER! Isn't the 1st time & pretending queer is nonsense,
Shit; I bar hop lookin for hoes, G's idea of bar hoppin's made a solid text career biting concepts.
& it's a fact! Allen called you out so IDK why anyone thinks this faggot is deadly,
Biters get caught eventually, we'll wait NC < ring a bell? A forum you've been banned from already.
Don't talk bout pipe game cuz yours weak & the reason ya hoe turned to a man son,
I gave her back Tobaccos from a simple bust down which afterwards diagnosed her w/ cervical cancer.
But the lame'll stay by her side cuz she's the only one he could pull, shit is sad,
So I'll help you get a grip on your emotions, once I place that worthless heart of yours in your hands.
You're not built tough, just a frail crack head, Amen's easily killin you fiends,
After this battle, he'll need a face lift that'll influence any gym rats body building routine.
I'm a straight G with the hands, but got burners with the extended clips in it,
So I'll quickly run up in G-spot n bare arms, since this pussy decided to get loose with his lips.

18, e/z...

[ILLunatic]

Amen starts 2 votes in the hole due to the dirty move pulled. Quote has been removed, voting proceed.

[Barcotic]

this battle was nice af

greedy went in, amen did too n wasn't far behind


greedy's opener was rofl
fabrications was rofl worthy as well, 2 dope personals to open
nick name was nice
hymen hit
deceased to amaze her was ok

a sure rinse n room for improvement were played, didn't like dirt on ya name

vs

feeding youtubes was dope
epic battle was nice
shot put was nice
bar hoppin was dope, strong personal

NC n face lift were played, not feeling tobaccos or grip on ur emotions, G spot was weak


so ya, for the most part u both went in, dope battle

I got greedy by a quote, n his wording seemed a little smoother than amen's tbh, little more impact

v/greedy

[ILLunatic]

1 vote received

[Donald Trump]

all you do is 1up shit like a faggit, n run ya mouth here
niggas said theres life on Mars, n u bragged about ur weed connect and summer house there
ur death'll be short, u should accept the support of ya peers n it's clear
Aer' supplyin ur lines woulda breathed life into that corpse you swears a career
ill slay this bum and every alias he has when i spray this gun
It'll only take one bullet to nick Name for D.O.A to be his latest one
wk14 I put my foot in ya ass, u just blamed it on the reefer and clowned a bit
Idgaf if you was Hymen..but I really need my left sneaker from out of it.
I won't question the times u talked shit cause a full clip is the answer
you dug this grave..I'll just throw dirt on ya, Name and you'll wish it was slander



Vs

This beatin'll be ruthless, a couple jabs, haymakers & after dawg I'ma slam ya,
Then have a doctor feeding youtubes, which he'd avoid at all cost; just to stay off of a camera
Greedy don't want to shoot the 5 cuz Amen'll easily check you with fist kid,
RB'll witness a single Shot Put this retard in line for a gold medal at the special Olympics.
& it's a fact! Allen called you out so IDK why anyone thinks this faggot is deadly,
Biters get caught eventually, we'll wait NC < ring a bell? A forum you've been banned from already.
You're not built tough, just a frail crack head, Amen's easily killin you fiends,
After this battle, he'll need a face lift that'll influence any gym rats body building routine.


Felt greedy was smooth with his verse, came in with no wordplay some creative punches and a solid flow, amen went straight for the jugular with a ton of personals and a good flow as well. Guess this one came down to personal preference I was really feeling greedy a verse felt he went on like a 3 bar run with sickness. He had some misses the selfie line and room for improvement were weak af to me. Amen had some cool oersonals but I didn't like the punches he had mixed in there, the bar hop didn't work for me, wasn't feeling the tobacco and the g spot one was lol but in a corny way. My vote here goes to greedy I felt he had the better verse

[Joe Boston]

Greedy

all you do is 1up shit like a faggit, n run ya mouth here
niggas said theres life on Mars, n u bragged about ur weed connect and summer house there
lol good humor factor tied into a slight personal

This pathological lying shit is getting bad.... u need serious help, b
u stitched enuf fabrications to make the next outfit u wear in a selfie
lol good flip

No one'll validate u. Fag we hate u and mean this shit, Queen
lol at needing a sure rinse, when you been washed up since season 16
cool personal hit

ur death'll be short, u should accept the support of ya peers n it's clear
Aer' supplyin ur lines woulda breathed life into that corpse you swears a career
good wordplay good flip

ill slay this bum and every alias he has when i spray this gun
It'll only take one bullet to nick Name for D.O.A to be his latest one
ok

wk14 I put my foot in ya ass, u just blamed it on the reefer and clowned a bit
Idgaf if you was Hymen..but I really need my left sneaker from out of it.
lol good wordplay

I won't question the times u talked shit cause a full clip is the answer
you dug this grave..I'll just throw dirt on ya, Name and you'll wish it was slander
good nameplay flip

Bein better at text than sex is why ur wife is in bed w/a goon
Your deceased to amaze her, and killed the relationship instead of the poon
lol

ya bitch about yo kick you out, cuz you been on this site forever
But u can sleep in ur talents room for improvement until you get your life together
lol

Amen

This beatin'll be ruthless, a couple jabs, haymakers & after dawg I'ma slam ya,
Then have a doctor feeding youtubes, which he'd avoid at all cost; just to stay off of a camera.
lmfao good personal shot and wordplay flip

Scared bitch, too shook to expose ya features? Which's why we label ya weaker,
The voters much rather epic battle, but this corny faggot isn't capable of producing either.
lol good wordplay another good personal

Greedy don't want to shoot the 5 cuz Amen'll easily check you with fist kid,
RB'll witness a single Shot Put this retard in line for a gold medal at the special Olympics.
played as far as the concept goes on the finisher I wasn't feeling how u displayed the execution of it

Pallet's no coincidence BITER! Isn't the 1st time & pretending queer is nonsense,
Shit; I bar hop lookin for hoes, G's idea of bar hoppin's made a solid text career biting concepts.
ok good personal shot but the barhoppin flip is played

& it's a fact! Allen called you out so IDK why anyone thinks this faggot is deadly,
Biters get caught eventually, we'll wait NC < ring a bell? A forum you've been banned from already.
nice personal

Don't talk bout pipe game cuz yours weak & the reason ya hoe turned to a man son,
I gave her back Tobaccos from a simple bust down which afterwards diagnosed her w/ cervical cancer.
good attempt on the wordplay the finisher bar was kind of stretched and wordy though

But the lame'll stay by her side cuz she's the only one he could pull, shit is sad,
So I'll help you get a grip on your emotions, once I place that worthless heart of yours in your hands.
played concept

You're not built tough, just a frail crack head, Amen's easily killin you fiends,
After this battle, he'll need a face lift that'll influence any gym rats body building routine.
lol direct hit nice flip

I'm a straight G with the hands, but got burners with the extended clips in it,
So I'll quickly run up in G-spot n bare arms, since this pussy decided to get loose with his lips.
nah

Greedy funny opener. The 2nd bar fabrication line was a good flip. sure rinse washed up since season 16 was good personal shot. Aer supplyin was good. lol Hymen was cool. dirt on ya name was cool. closer was cool. Amen good personal shots first two bars lmao. NC ring a bell was a good personal. face lift was cool. I felt greedy was creative with his flips and wordplays. Amen went the personal which he did good he had a couple played concepts and some finishers were a little too wordy n stretched. Amen was doing good going personal I felt he should've continued that approach but he kinda fell off towards the end. This can either way because I felt Ames personal shots were funny and did add up to what Greedy had. Greedy overall was more creative and consistent though.

V/Greedy

[ILLunatic]

3 votes received

[AKER]

all you do is 1up shit like a faggit, n run ya mouth here
niggas said theres life on Mars, n u bragged about ur weed connect and summer house there
No one'll validate u. Fag we hate u and mean this shit, Queen
lol at needing a sure rinse, when you been washed up since season 16
ur death'll be short, u should accept the support of ya peers n it's clear
Aer' supplyin ur lines woulda breathed life into that corpse you swears a career
wk14 I put my foot in ya ass, u just blamed it on the reefer and clowned a bit
Idgaf if you was Hymen..but I really need my left sneaker from out of it.
I won't question the times u talked shit cause a full clip is the answer
you dug this grave..I'll just throw dirt on ya, Name and you'll wish it was slander

vs

Pallet's no coincidence BITER! Isn't the 1st time & pretending queer is nonsense,
Shit; I bar hop lookin for hoes, G's idea of bar hoppin's made a solid text career biting concepts.
You're not built tough, just a frail crack head, Amen's easily killin you fiends,
After this battle, he'll need a face lift that'll influence any gym rats body building routine.


amen just got styled on hard, greedy murked em here hands down. a lot of amens shit was drawn out and worded in a way that lacked connection and impact... a lot of stretched and overly worded punchlines took away from any impact they had. greedys execution was just waay more on point which made for overall a way harder hitting verse. greedy gmv

[ILLunatic]

4 votes received, giving this until the AM

[Tic]

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all you do is 1up shit like a faggit, n run ya mouth here
niggas said theres life on Mars, n u bragged about ur weed connect and summer house there
This was decent.
This pathological lying shit is getting bad.... u need serious help, b
u stitched enuf fabrications to make the next outfit u wear in a selfie
Ha ok, nice.
No one'll validate u. Fag we hate u and mean this shit, Queen
lol at needing a sure rinse, when you been washed up since season 16
I liked this.


ur death'll be short, u should accept the support of ya peers n it's clear
Aer' supplyin ur lines woulda breathed life into that corpse you swears a career
Like this too.
ill slay this bum and every alias he has when i spray this gun
It'll only take one bullet to nick Name for D.O.A to be his latest one
This was nice.
wk14 I put my foot in ya ass, u just blamed it on the reefer and clowned a bit
Idgaf if you was Hymen..but I really need my left sneaker from out of it.
I didn't like this.
I won't question the times u talked shit cause a full clip is the answer
you dug this grave..I'll just throw dirt on ya, Name and you'll wish it was slander
Ok this was cool.
Bein better at text than sex is why ur wife is in bed w/a goon
Your deceased to amaze her, and killed the relationship instead of the poon
I probably would've ended it differently, but cool.
ya bitch about yo kick you out, cuz you been on this site forever
But u can sleep in ur talents room for improvement until you get your life together
Not feeling this.

Listen...

This beatin'll be ruthless, a couple jabs, haymakers & after dawg I'ma slam ya,
Then have a doctor feeding youtubes, which he'd avoid at all cost; just to stay off of a camera.
This was cool.
Scared bitch, too shook to expose ya features? Which's why we label ya weaker,
The voters much rather epic battle, but this corny faggot isn't capable of producing either.
epic / E pic? Nah it's not pronounced that way. Dope concept though.
Greedy don't want to shoot the 5 cuz Amen'll easily check you with fist kid,
RB'll witness a single Shot Put this retard in line for a gold medal at the special Olympics.
Yo this was stretched AF, son. Cool concept, but the syllable count made it feel stretched.
Pallet's no coincidence BITER! Isn't the 1st time & pretending queer is nonsense,
Shit; I bar hop lookin for hoes, G's idea of bar hoppin's made a solid text career biting concepts.
This was ok.
& it's a fact! Allen called you out so IDK why anyone thinks this faggot is deadly,
Biters get caught eventually, we'll wait NC < ring a bell? A forum you've been banned from already.
I liked this.
Don't talk bout pipe game cuz yours weak & the reason ya hoe turned to a man son,
I gave her back Tobaccos from a simple bust down which afterwards diagnosed her w/ cervical cancer.
Cool concept man, just felt stretched again. You usually don't stretch your bars.
But the lame'll stay by her side cuz she's the only one he could pull, shit is sad,
So I'll help you get a grip on your emotions, once I place that worthless heart of yours in your hands.
I liked this.
You're not built tough, just a frail crack head, Amen's easily killin you fiends,
After this battle, he'll need a face lift that'll influence any gym rats body building routine.
Liked this.
I'm a straight G with the hands, but got burners with the extended clips in it,
So I'll quickly run up in G-spot n bare arms, since this pussy decided to get loose with his lips.
Ehhhhh.

18, e/z...

This was a good battle. Greedy was consistent AF in my opinion, with a couple zingers in there. He came with a personal approach that mirrored his better battles this season. I liked a lot of lines in there, and most were worded pretty crisp. Most notable were: Selfie / Washed up / Aer supply / Slander / D.O.A. Amen was pretty consistent too, but there were a few bars that just felt really stretched and were almost 30 syllables. That just threw off the flow for me. Most noteable were: Opener / Heart in hands / Gym rat / Tobaccos bareeeeeeeely.

Like I said, this was a pretty good battle. Both came nice but I just feel that Greedy had harsher punches, along with 1 more quote, so I gotta give it to him. Good Semis, fellas.

Greedy

[Fresh]

This pathological lying shit is getting bad.... u need serious help, b
u stitched enuf fabrications to make the next outfit u wear in a selfie
No one'll validate u. Fag we hate u and mean this shit, Queen
lol at needing a sure rinse, when you been washed up since season 16
ur death'll be short, u should accept the support of ya peers n it's clear
Aer' supplyin ur lines woulda breathed life into that corpse you swears a career
ill slay this bum and every alias he has when i spray this gun
It'll only take one bullet to nick Name for D.O.A to be his latest one
wk14 I put my foot in ya ass, u just blamed it on the reefer and clowned a bit
Idgaf if you was Hymen..but I really need my left sneaker from out of it.
I won't question the times u talked shit cause a full clip is the answer
you dug this grave..I'll just throw dirt on ya, Name and you'll wish it was slander
Bein better at text than sex is why ur wife is in bed w/a goon
Your deceased to amaze her, and killed the relationship instead of the poon

Vs

This beatin'll be ruthless, a couple jabs, haymakers & after dawg I'ma slam ya,
Then have a doctor feeding youtubes, which he'd avoid at all cost; just to stay off of a camera.
Scared bitch, too shook to expose ya features? Which's why we label ya weaker,
The voters much rather epic battle, but this corny faggot isn't capable of producing either.
Greedy don't want to shoot the 5 cuz Amen'll easily check you with fist kid,
RB'll witness a single Shot Put this retard in line for a gold medal at the special Olympics.
But the lame'll stay by her side cuz she's the only one he could pull, shit is sad,
So I'll help you get a grip on your emotions, once I place that worthless heart of yours in your hands.


Pretty nice battle here. I was feeling almost all of Greedy s verse except 2 bars. Amen had a nice verse but he just got out punched here and with that being said

v greedy