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    addict

    addiction everyones personal confliction
    its different inside this circle of affliction
    worthless and hurting in a permanent condition
    a sickness so listen intently to earnest intentions
    and learn with forgiveness these burning convictions
    nervously printing the urge to kick this habit
    stab it before the insanity becomes automatic
    you hand in your courage for worries and madness
    until planted in dirt or buried in sadness
    damning the earth no concern of his actions
    slammed by this curse of infurious passion
    he flirts with his death in luxurious fashion

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    Re: addict

    Honestly... I feel addiction is a personality trait more then a substance but the worst I ever did was sniff yay but I smoke cigs too. I was addicted to gambling, when I’d get stressed I used to go to the casino and just think (so much my boy used to call me Ginger). I just got over it... like struggling myself with alcohol lately and it’s the habit not substance that is fucking me up. I was mandated to AA when I was 14 being an at risk youth and was sober most of my life but grateful I remember those stories so I saw when warning signs were to come and I can curb it. Once you have your mind set... you can do anything (will is a powerful conquerer). Best wishes and I feel you... I’m struggling myself too ��
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    Re: addict

    Tight but short. I liked your choice of vocab and the rhythm of the whole piece. Although the imagery was vague I caught the frustration of the narrator:

    "you hand in your courage for worries and madness
    until planted in dirt or buried in sadness"

    Great lines. It's always good to see people taking on a topic away from the norm and this didn't disappoint. Keep on posting. This forum needs a resurrection.

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