Hi I'm Astronomical

[Sho 'Nuff]

Astro's the condensed version.
Never been a people person.
Quiet. Silent..
Only acknowledged if you deserved it
Seen scenes most live their life & not see
I get obscene dreams of serene things when I sleep
Walk through life like a quiet mumble
If I had to be one thing I'd say I'm quite humble
I don't judge, you do what you do
I got my own problems I don't need to take on yours too
To tell the truth? Gays don't bother me.
I think love is love, even if its male on male swallowing. :/
I don't get into politics, i think its none sense
& sports to me are only fun to play, not watch on tv
I pass up on hard liquor now a days. To many nights where I seem to get sicker and life was led astray
I love beer on the other hand, I prefer bud light and relaxing with a few friends.
I'm a smoker, never of cigarettes though, the kindest buds is all I toke
Currently in the process of renting a house in a nice neighborhood
With my girl, it's a big leap in life so I'm nervous it turns out good.
This piece wasn't as good as I can be I understand this.
But it's simple, something I can use to show you who the man is.

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- Astro.

[ILLunatic]

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[Nicasso]

For something quickly put together as and intro this was good enough to serve its purpose. Now I would ve liked to see a more challenging approach to your first drop than something of this magnitude. Solid for an introduction tho.Sorry for the short feed its late.

[Sho 'Nuff]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...89-omnipresent
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...t-Box-Volume-4

[alphadog]

Nice simplistic rhyme scheme, topic was basic if even ones present, for a key style i suppose it could have more creativity dude,, best part for me.,,,,,,,,
don't judge, you do what you do
I got my own problems I don't need to take on yours too
To tell the truth? Gays don't bother me.
I think love is love, even if its male on male swallowing. :/,

peace