WK 4: Endfamous Vs Highenginechief (HEC WINS)

[SiK]

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@endfamous @HighEngineChief

[The Infamous]

sdfgsf

[HighEngineChief]

What he said.

[HighEngineChief]

Another grown man who loves cartoons and text endeavors,
Like a lot of kids here. Glad you registered - with the other sex offenders.

[The Infamous]

High dont get outta character and bold and shit cuz my men'll fold ya
u can get cap'd in america cuz i stay armed with the metal like the winter soldier...

[Wordz AhGod.]

HEC had some wording issues but they weren't as rough around the edges as EndFamous. Both had a good concept and Endfamous took more thought but couldn't connect due to the wording. HEC was more clear and precise and had a good comical aspect to it. It would have been much harder if he would have tied it in better with his setup line.

v/HEC

[ILLunatic]

Both were quite frankly indirect and neutral as they could have been used against anyone with the same effect. HIghEngineChief had a decent concept that appeared a little off here and there but overall was a decent filler bar.

Endfamous to me was not really there with a concept and was very choppy with the first bar which I felt was very difficult to recover from. Using and after and completely tarnished the flow and made me feel like I was reading a bar from a dude stuttering, but literally stuttered in the text.

Overall, not an impressive battle but HighEngineChief edged it here.

Vote - HighEngineChief

[Amen]

v/HIGH




I've seen the registered/sex offenders concept flipped a few times but you gave it some what of a cool twist. I think your bar had more of the humor/insult'ish factor then END's. END's bar was wayyyyy to smatement'ish. Try insulting your opponent or at least word your concepts a little more clearer ending with some type of insult to annihilate/humiliate your opponent. Not to mention, I've seen the Captain/Capped in America flipped a few times as well... Your flip was basic and generic, IMO.

[.Twisted.]

Hec had a different lil flip to it
End was more of a statement

V/hec

[Rilla]

Hec - decent wording and simple concept

Endf - cool concept, but was stretched and the punch didnt hit very hard imo.

Vote HEC

[Illustrious.]

Vote cheif

Cheifs concept was alright, wasnt feeling the start of it but the finishing part of the bar was a bit better. Id say this is an average hit.

Famous def tried to do too much here and over sis it. I can appreciate the creativity but there was too much going on and the flow and execution seemed choppy. Id say this is a miss.

Overall chief hit with better execution andwith an ok concept