10 lines
Due tomorrow
Smog
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10 lines
Due tomorrow
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Your job is like your sexuality; when you drive it home you rarely go straight,
You hauling freight is the only real time you can actually say you're carrying weight
Man look at ur pic, you want people to think you're tough... but you're fakin it heavily
If anyone thinks that smog is dangerous its definitely a mistaken identity
You've been trying so hard to get better dawg, but by now you fucking should be rippin
So when people say smogs come far, they are actually talking about this pussy spittin
This is a battle of wits and I'm heavily armed so I'll cause you bodily harm
My punches are so hard that I produce more vegetables than broccoli farms
The time at which you started rhyming is same time your style became obsolete
You can step to me, but you'll be hitting the dirt harder than ostrich feet
U must a misunderstood fresh concepts, I mean really bad son,
Cuz I read 10 of ur battles, 100 bars, n none don't even have one,
Damn I gleam, im mad clean ,outkast taught me well,
U "Fresh to death right", good lord what the fuck is that awful smell,
Ur soft as hell, I don't wanna murder u, I'd rather watch u suffer from each loss ur dealt,
Cuz inevitably nature plays its part,n eventually ,fresh rots itself,
This cat rocks a cap wit a light bulb, that don't convince me ur a bright kid,
Ill save one punch for the hat,just like that, I'm hittin the light switch,
I know u got ur eyes on the prize bitch, but yo, my flies zipped,
Ill snap this MC (MasterCard), dont worry bout my dick, cuz every inch up to nine is fuckin priceless,
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=471666
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...07#post8416807
There is not one single battle left I can vote on, so heres my 2 links instead of three.
I voted on everyone allready
uppp / @Smog you and I are active as fuck son! the only battles left I haven't voted on have crew members in it.
post 2 links to them in hereOriginally Posted by Smog
I e already used um
vote fresh for the attempts
smog you need to stop just rhyming words get some content some good twists going wordplay something i loled@ the flies zipped thing but it was corny as hell
fresh your attempts are better but attempts wont get you a title shot polish your lines a bit
remember its a battle of wits not whose tougher with words...
v/ fresh
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DEAD^^^
Fresh
ok... kinda weak for an opener though
ok... decent
weak attempt at name play...
The wording damaged the strength of the punch greatly...
ok closer
Smog
umm...no... weak opener...
ok clowning shot... nothing more
feeling this...
ehhh not really feeling this
bad closer...
Neither dropped any punches really worth mentioning, Fresh had a couple ok...OK.... concepts, Smog had one.
If I could vote I'd give it to Smog, but yea theres feed anyway.
Your job is like your sexuality; when you drive it home you rarely go straight,
You hauling freight is the only real time you can actually say you're carrying weight
weak
Man look at ur pic, you want people to think you're tough... but you're fakin it heavily
If anyone thinks that smog is dangerous its definitely a mistaken identity
nah
You've been trying so hard to get better dawg, but by now you fucking should be rippin
So when people say smogs come far, they are actually talking about this pussy spittin
weak
This is a battle of wits and I'm heavily armed so I'll cause you bodily harm
My punches are so hard that I produce more vegetables than broccoli farms
meh..
The time at which you started rhyming is same time your style became obsolete
You can step to me, but you'll be hitting the dirt harder than ostrich feet
corny
vs
U must a misunderstood fresh concepts, I mean really bad son,
Cuz I read 10 of ur battles, 100 bars, n none don't even have one,
statement ish
Damn I gleam, im mad clean ,outkast taught me well,
U "Fresh to death right", good lord what the fuck is that awful smell,
corny
Ur soft as hell, I don't wanna murder u, I'd rather watch u suffer from each loss ur dealt,
Cuz inevitably nature plays its part,n eventually ,fresh rots itself,
nah
This cat rocks a cap wit a light bulb, that don't convince me ur a bright kid,
Ill save one punch for the hat,just like that, I'm hittin the light switch,
bad wording
I know u got ur eyes on the prize bitch, but yo, my flies zipped,
Ill snap this MC (MasterCard), dont worry bout my dick, cuz every inch up to nine is fuckin priceless,
corny
not a strong punch from either verse..i got fresh taking this for having a stronger punch than smog's best
v. fresh
Nothing
vs
This is a battle of wits and I'm heavily armed so I'll cause you bodily harm
My punches are so hard that I produce more vegetables than broccoli farms
That bar was, eh. But probably one of your better concepts throughout the entire verse. If you had more concepts like that in your verse, it would have been a pretty decent verse. Both need to work on witty/harsh concepts and executing them.
MVGT: Fresh
This is a battle of wits and I'm heavily armed so I'll cause you bodily harm
My punches are so hard that I produce more vegetables than broccoli farms
vs.
U must a misunderstood fresh concepts, I mean really bad son,
Cuz I read 10 of ur battles, 100 bars, n none don't even have one,
kinda sub-par battle. I quoted the best attempt from each. I was feeling fresh's more.
v/fresh
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