Ghetto Gospel Remix...advice?

[nowayyahweh671]

sup guys, im new to this forum so sorry if im posting in the wrong spot, but i was wondering if this video is good? lol, i dont really record officially, just play the beat and record me rapping with a camera, but before i DO get serious about rap, i was wondering if im actually any good? this is probably my best video, my other videos are alright but im not as proud of them as i am of this. so please, give me some feedback, if im good then thank you very much, if i suck then please tell me. thanks everyone

[thedonpvs]

hmm it was koo..your flow needs alil work sound kinda iffy in some place..your rhyme scheme seems pretty tuned..with alittle work you should be koo..i just would never rhyme on a pac instrumental cuz ur music gets compared to his..but good stuff

[nowayyahweh671]

thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it. and yeahh, i prolly shoulda thought that through before writing to it lol