Eskimo Kisses

[JMS]

Eskimo Kisses

fingertips gently gliding over bare skin
caressing beauty as it sleeps
soft breaths fill the morning air
breaking the natural monotony of a resting world
the pillows whisper quietly to each other
while the walls watch silently
ready to create new memories
oh if they could speak...
sheets graciously step aside
in fear of waking the dreamers
fingertips still gliding,
as if trying to read what the surface is saying
the sun slowly peeking through closed curtains
as the face on the wall smiles
sweet energy magnified brings peace to the soul
the soft light bouncing
revealing the dream the dark was hiding
tangled, comfortable, happy
the world spins slower, the room's beat steadies
gentle eyes open and speak
hands intertwined, attempting to catch time
attempting to keep it still
to keep it for the moment
the sun beckons, pleading for separation
the world is awake and demanding
heavy footsteps lead a light heart back to reality
farewell and fair well
parting ways with eskimo kisses...

[Pistols Pete]

the world spins slower, the room's beat steadies
gentle eyes open and speak
hands intertwined, attempting to catch time
-beautiful poem... the imagery was amazing throughout.. the metaphors where great "sweet energy magnified brings peace to the soul" the wording was very nice...
ill be real and say the title kinda through me.. but im glad i read it.. keep posting

[Madbeats]

Very sweet and beautifully written. Good work.

[Chinese]

I agree with Beats, it's very intimate and passionate. Thank you for your drop.

[ItoldUIwasFat]

very descriptive piecr here the words seem to glide
next to each other with such smoothness and effortless
direction. the flow of this is very serene and the imagery
this gives off is beautiful. very enjoyable read bro.
like i said the serene feel and the ease of yout words
made this a really cool piece to read.

keep posting bruh

[JMS]

thanks a lot guys, this was written to one of my best, if not the best experience I've had with a fellow human being over the summer. she's got my heart in her pocket. I'll get at you later today