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    'A Depressed and Slightly Deluded Old Man'

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    'My mind is merely a memory,' He had spoken.

    'A continuously churning memory
    Fueled only by the deadness of my own self-being.'

    He sighed.

    And I attempted to meet his eyes with my own eyes
    To signify a silent moment of mourning or
    A sentimental second of understanding.

    His eyes only met the black wall of its eyelids.

    He spoke again.

    'I often feel as though death is nothing
    More than a devious con that somehow manipulated
    The universe into existence.'

    'I cannot see the universe forming on the basis
    That it would eventually wither back into
    The nothingness from which it came.'

    'Surely the universe is not so suicidal.'

    And he sighed again.

    And his eyes were still closed but his mouth was
    Open like a gaping pit of never-ending stupor.

    I sat there in a disturbed silence, a dreadfully
    Absurd silence contemplating what he had just said,
    And what I was to say in logical return.

    'Well..' I stuttered.

    'I find it to be quite plausible that the formation
    Of the universe was caused just by a mere mistake.'

    'That life and death are nothing more than a product
    Of this mistake: a simple yet intricate coincidence.'

    And I shifted as he slowly lifted his eyes toward mine.

    'That is pure balderdash,' He sputtered.

    'Complete and total senselessness,' He spat.

    'I have never heard such stupidity spill from
    A mans mouth - such blatant and careless incompetence.'

    He sighed yet again and then grimaced at me for what
    seemed to be hours.

    He was throughly disgusted by my ignorance.

    He put his face in his hands and spun his head
    in circles.

    He eventually collapsed from dizzyness and I
    shuffled hurriedly out of the back door.
    Last edited by Dkoi; September 19th, 2011 at 12:16 PM

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