TRIIO Near the End Ft. lady Ling

[Bstill]

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[I-M-E]

vocals seem low, flow is pretty good for the most part, dunno if im feeling the delivery, lyrics are good....hooks good, kinda puts ya in a trance....not a bad track

[Bstill]

appreciate the feed gettin mastered todah

[Andrewert]

little like Slim Shady voice good flow good lyrics (the first person)

[Caiyo]

verse 1 . j dubb
verse 2. bstill
verse 3 . tension

chorus= ladyling( my girl)

but thanks fa da feed

[Bstill]

uppin for feed

[Milk Man]

1st verse is cool, chorus is on point. does remind me of some old school eminem, this is pretty sick. the singing is done very nicely. fits the beat nicely. 2nd verse, vocals a lil low, lyrics are dope tho. flow is good. delivered decently, some words seem a lil rushed but it works. 3rd is cool too this verse has more emotion.

this is pretty cool collaboration, feelin it. good drop

[Bstill]

thanx milk man congrats on ur tracks induction man

[Art.]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...280/index.html
hit this up

i like it my dude first verse sounds like somehting off the slimshady lp voice wise...
chorus is dope feel the emotion from it pretty cool
2nd verse reall cool smooth flow lyrics are on point delivery dope as well vocalss a bitt loww but other than that no complaints
3rd verse is cool as well lil more emotion i feel ffrom that.... but overall good track guys keep it up

[Bstill]

thanks for the feed fam i Returned it

[Its Nell]

flow and voice reminds me of old school eminem haha, but yeh, nice track you got here, lyrics were decent and the female vocal or sample on the hook was dope, this was quite legit, maybe vocals could of been abit louder in point, based on the monitors im listening through, but keep it up

[Bstill]

thanx for the feed

[Caiyo]

flow and voice reminds me of old school eminem haha, but yeh, nice track you got here, lyrics were decent and the female vocal or sample on the hook was dope, this was quite legit, maybe vocals could of been abit louder in point, based on the monitors im listening through, but keep it up

not a sample...she was atually there singin it...but thanks everyone fa da feed.will rtf asap

[Dre Mack Musick]

first verse was awesome, the second verse was aight, but he came in a tad too low but i noticed u said u were takin it to be master so thats whats up. third verse was aight as well. No complaints about the song with the except the first cat really set the tone for the song- as stated by a few others he has an early em type of voice which made it really enjoyable along with his voice inflection and such. second cat did a good follow up but the third verse didnt really end the song well.

i would recommend re-ordering the verses like 1st. tension 2.b-still 3. jdubb
but it may take away from how the song caught my ear in the first **shrugs** just somethin to think about

and i love the hook + the adlibs ole girl did, she did extremely well imo and i am somewhat jealous i want a singer *tear*
good drop tho, played it thrice to give ya some detailed feed. wouldnt have done that if it was ass chips

[Caiyo]

Well appreciated.. & and yeah she's my girl...so amagine how that is..


*looks at dre*
*prances around*

lol naw but ty and ups for more..