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    Space man blues (short)

    Spaceman Blues

    Finite minds,
    Grasping,
    Futile singularity
    In their vacuum tongues

    Black hole blind
    Crafting
    ventricle galaxies
    as their centre of gravity runs

    warped thoughts
    scorch cinder suns,
    as moons blues plays over
    ear drums bleeding…
    I’ve seen your sattalite devotion'
    float from'
    Orbit to orbit as I'
    peered into the ovary earth
    And aborted the core
    of your volcanic existence

    I am a hand written prism'
    sent to reflect on
    Glass like collisions between you...
    and spectrum darkness

    Overall. I’m bored of writing now. So I’m just gonna roll a joint and shut up.
    Last edited by Poeta Demonio; April 27th, 2011 at 07:47 PM
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    Re: Space man blues (short)

    just to show im still alive and shit. lol
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    Re: Space man blues (short)

    Links dude.
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    have until tomorrow to get the links or closed.
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    Re: Space man blues (short)

    Ugh, hate to close this but it's been a week...and hey you know the rules, you wrote 'em. Moving this to closed poems for now. Links and it's back open.
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