You ain’t seen me nor do you know my story bro
But that ain’t stopping me all it takes is just one hit to blow
Up, only a kid 19 still so young and green
Lonely in this world with a serious lack of esteem
The challenges that lie ahead of course he claims to forsee
But they are like a ladder compared to climbing up this ravine
But now he’s going and giving a preview of just exactly what he do
And if you give him time you’ll be amazed when he breaks through
At the rhymes he spits the lyrics the flow you can’t help but get into
And you try to fight it hating on him just because he is new
So far from hood he resides right underneath your shoe
Where he hides and always keeps his thoughts locked up inside
Until the day where he decides to take a risk swallow his pride
And just put it all out on the line give himself a chance to shine
So here it goes headphones on just watch as he steals the show
Year’s of bottled up emotion that he’s been waiting to just let go
A new identity, he has acquired just call him jason bourne
He’s killing them he knows it but he can’t just stop to mourn
His shoes untied he’s clumsy so to this beat he’s trippin
Closing his eyes and screaming, more into it he keeps getting
I'm an amateur writer for sure, but through a handful of pieces, I've realized my biggest problem is closing a song. I write and write and write and think, wow this is actually good, but I always hit a spot where I almost don't know what direction to go in. So in the word document I have like 10 other verses and none of them I like. Any suggestions on getting past this?
So far it's like a quiet guy that finally finds a way to connect with the world. Similar to myself in ways, but not completely.
Thanks in advance.
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