Doza - I'm a monster

[Aversie]

[YOUTUBE]Se58kwWrg5U[/YOUTUBE]



Some feed please?


links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...376/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...456/index.html

[I-M-E]

cool beat, flows good, kinda hard to hear ur lyrics in parts, not a fan of the hook

[RobbieAnthem]

I agree beat is banging and your flow is good but is hard to your lyrics at times. The hook is decent but since your saying your a monster you should say it like your really a monster with more attitude. Overall good job mane

[Aversie]

I know not everything there are some problems... Pro tools was acting strange.

thanks for the feed

[LivenLearn23]

The vocals are kinda low in the mix, the beat seems interesting....Your delivery is different, not bad just different needs a lil more energy but not bad....keep practicing and get the delivery down cuz if u do ur drops will sound way better...the lyrics seem written well, so keep up the good work man

[JaE MeRk]

this shit ight beat is hard flow is nice n lyrics str8 keep doin yah thing homey

[Aversie]

aight thanks yall

[kontro]

sounds like i'm going on an adventure LOL. umm, you have a long way to go dawg, don't hang your head just keep doing your thing, you just need better equipment really.

[~Flow]

your vocals are a little low, have a little trouble hearing you

but your flow is on point, you do something i like which is like continuing your bars into the next bar. just straight rapping through the shit

but the delivery would be nice if it was louder i think

hook is a little simple, but the verses make up for it

[J-min]

Vocals i tihnk need upping abit id say about 2db

im feeling this beat alot going on comes out hard and dramatic
ive only been spitting 5 months so if anything id learn from the flow
but to me sounds all good all on point


RTF

[Aversie]

ok thanks yall

[Chuck Diesel]

i wouldnt go so far as to say you have a long way to go. your flow is actually fire. your lyrics are straight just need to work on your mix game.

[Aversie]

ok man thanks

[DeuceDaDon]

um feelin da beat...delivery needs a lil work more energy would make it better...lyrics wer kool...i thought the hook was good jus needed a more aggressive sounding feel to it...overall this was decent...keep doin ya thang

[Tha Q]

Im thinkin this is gonna be a sample of Kanyes Monster...but I like the instruments in the beat...really intense...

flow is pretty cool


I think you came appropriately for this track


coo



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